Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details (what you read and how often). Use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement, and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I read novels almost every day, and I especially like horror and fiction because they keep me engaged and spark my imagination.

提案: Keep the answer natural and tighten phrasing. Use present simple consistently and add one specific reason or brief comparison. Use a linking word to connect idea to reason.

例: I prefer reading on a screen, mainly on my phone, because it’s portable and lets me read whenever I have a free moment.

提案: Correct grammar (remove repeated words, use correct verb forms) and structure: give a clear contrast using linking words. Be specific about what careful reading involves and what scanning looks like.

例: I need to read carefully when I’m doing assignments because I have to understand details and follow instructions. In contrast, if I’m just searching for quick facts online, I usually scan headings and bullet points.

提案: This answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Use smoother linking phrases and correct small phrasing issues (e.g., ‘detailed reading’ not ‘detail reading’). Give a brief reason for each preference.

例: It depends on the situation: for homework I prefer detailed reading to fully understand the material, but for quick research I scan to find relevant information fast.

× Yes I like reading. I reading the book such as novel everyday and the type I like is horror and fiction.

✓ Yes, I like reading. I read books such as novels every day, and the types I like are horror and fiction.

The original uses 'I reading' which omits the auxiliary or correct verb form; this is an issue with verb + -ing form and general verb form. Change to simple present 'I read' for habitual action. 'book such as novel' should be plural 'books such as novels'. 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb phrase). Also 'type I like is' should be plural 'types I like are' to match plural nouns and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, pluralize countable nouns, and separate 'every day' for frequency.

× I prefer to read on a screen. I will read on my mobile phone because I can bring my phone anywhere and I can read the books when I want.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen. I read on my mobile phone because I can bring my phone anywhere and I can read books whenever I want.

The sentence uses 'I will read' which implies future intent but the context is a general preference and habitual action, so simple present 'I read' is more appropriate. Also 'read the books' is unneeded article; use 'read books'. 'when I want' is more natural as 'whenever I want'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and preferences and avoid unnecessary definite articles.

× I need to read carefully when I I'm doing my assignment because it need to read in detail.

✓ I need to read carefully when I'm doing my assignment because it needs to be read in detail.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: 'I I'm' is a typo; keep one 'I'm'. 'it need' is wrong: third person singular requires 'needs'. Also the passive idea 'need to read in detail' is better as 'needs to be read in detail' to indicate the assignment requires detailed reading. Suggestion: fix contractions, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct passive construction when appropriate.

× However, if I just want to search some information I will scan it.

✓ However, if I just want to search for some information, I scan it quickly.

Using 'I will scan it' suggests a future action; in conditional general statements, simple present 'I scan it' is preferred. Also add 'for' after 'search' ('search for information') and include an adverb 'quickly' to clarify scanning. Suggestion: use 'search for' and simple present for habitual conditional actions.

× I think it depends on what situation. If I'm doing my homework, I need detail reading. However, if I just want to search information, I prefer scanning.

✓ I think it depends on the situation. If I'm doing my homework, I need detailed reading. However, if I just want to search for information, I prefer scanning.

'what situation' is awkward; use 'the situation'. 'detail reading' is incorrect word form; use adjective 'detailed reading' or 'detailed reading methods'. Also 'search information' needs preposition 'for'. Suggestions: use correct noun phrases ('the situation'), adjective forms ('detailed'), and 'search for' when looking for information.