Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a concise direct answer, use correct tense and sentence structure, avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details linked logically (use linking words like 'because' or 'so'). Watch verb forms (present simple) and article/use of pronouns.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I speak to them almost every day because it helps me relax and lifts my mood, especially after a stressful day.

提案: Answer directly and avoid repeating phrases. Use correct verb patterns (discuss my future, share my happiness) and make sure questions you mention are grammatically correct. Provide specific examples of topics and link them with words like 'for example' or 'also'.

例: We usually talk about our future plans and careers. For example, I often discuss job opportunities and study plans with them, and I also ask casual questions like 'Have you had lunch?' to catch up.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and use articles correctly ('an introvert'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect reasons. Keep sentences concise and avoid trailing off. Give a brief specific example to illustrate your preference.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable sharing personal things one-on-one. For example, I can talk about my worries in detail with my closest friend without feeling judged.

提案: Use present simple tense and improve clarity: avoid redundant phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and give specific reasons (body language, tone). Correct pronoun usage and simplify phrasing.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and allows me to read body language and tone of voice, which helps me understand what the other person really means.

提案: Clarify when and why you argue; avoid saying 'I will argue immediately' which sounds aggressive. Use present simple and conditional: 'I argue when...' Provide one short example of a past situation and use linking words like 'when' or 'if'.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when there is a misunderstanding. For instance, if someone misinterprets my opinion, I calmly explain my point and discuss it until we understand each other.

× Yes, I like to chat with my friends. I when I speak to them, I was very happy and it was stress relief and I was used to talk to them daily and it was so much fun and.

✓ Yes, I like to chat with my friends. When I speak to them, I am very happy; it is stress relief. I used to talk to them daily and it was so much fun.

Multiple sentence structure and tense problems: 'I when I speak to them, I was very happy' is misordered and mixes present and past tenses; corrected to 'When I speak to them, I am very happy' to match habitual present. 'it was stress relief' should be 'it is stress relief' for a general truth. 'I was used to talk to them daily' misuses 'was used to' and verb form; correct phrase is 'I used to talk to them daily' to indicate a past habitual action or 'I usually talk to them daily' for present habit. Suggestions: keep consistent tense, place adverbial clauses at start correctly, and use correct forms of 'used to' or 'be used to' followed by noun/verb+ing.

× I usually chat with my friends, I will discuss about my future with my friends and I will share my happiness to them.

✓ I usually chat with my friends. I discuss my future with them and I share my happiness with them.

'Will' is unnecessary when describing habitual actions; simple present 'discuss' and 'share' should be used. Also 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not take 'about'. Use 'share with' rather than 'share to'. Suggestions: use simple present for routines and remember correct verb-preposition collocations.

× I always supposed to ask them or are you had the lunch?

✓ I am always supposed to ask them, 'Have you had lunch?','

'I always supposed to' lacks auxiliary 'am' and tense is wrong. The embedded question 'are you had the lunch?' is ungrammatical; correct question is 'Have you had lunch?' which uses present perfect. Also use appropriate punctuation or report speech format when quoting questions. Suggestion: use 'am supposed to' for obligations and learn correct question forms.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am a introvert person.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am an introvert.

'a introvert person' is incorrect article and wordiness. 'Introvert' as a noun should be preceded by 'an' if used as 'an introvert', but better to say 'I am an introvert' or 'I am introverted'. Suggestion: use 'an' before vowel sounds and avoid redundant 'person' after personality noun.

× I only share with my friend all of my personal things and I only show my happiness and sadness with that one friend.

✓ I only share all of my personal matters with my friend, and I only show my happiness and sadness to that one friend.

Word order improved: 'share with my friend all of my personal things' is awkward; place object after verb phrase. Use 'with' for 'share with' and 'show ... to' is more natural than 'show ... with'. Suggestions: keep prepositions consistent and use natural collocations like 'personal matters'.

× If I speak with a group of people, it was difficult to communicate all of my problems and.

✓ If I speak with a group of people, it is difficult to communicate all of my problems.

Mixed tenses: conditional clause uses present 'If I speak' so main clause should be present 'it is difficult'. Trailing 'and' is incomplete. Suggestion: ensure conditional clauses match in tense and avoid sentence fragments.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it was more comfortable when we are speaking with face to face and we can speak very friendly and we can observe and analyze all those things that they their thoughts, what they are thinking.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is more comfortable when we speak face to face; we can speak more friendly and observe and analyze their thoughts.

Tense inconsistency: 'it was more comfortable' should be present 'it is more comfortable' to match 'I prefer'. Redundant 'with face to face' removed. 'Speak very friendly' is awkward; use 'speak more friendly' or 'speak in a friendlier way'. 'observe and analyze all those things that they their thoughts, what they are thinking' is ungrammatical and repetitive; simplified to 'observe and analyze their thoughts'. Suggestions: keep present tense for preferences, remove redundancy, and use clearer noun phrases.

× Yes, I will argue with my friends if my sentence was correct, and if any uh, misunderstanding between my friends, I will talk about my thoughts.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends if my point is correct, and if there is any misunderstanding with my friends, I will talk about my thoughts.

Use simple present 'I argue' or 'I will argue' consistently; original mixed future and past 'was'. 'If any misunderstanding between my friends' lacks verb 'there is'. Also 'my sentence' is unnatural; use 'my point' or 'what I said'. Suggestions: use consistent tense and include 'there is' for existence of misunderstanding.

× If they are saying that I was wrong, I will argue with them immediately.

✓ If they say that I am wrong, I will argue with them immediately.

Conditional tense alignment: 'If they are saying that I was wrong' mixes progressive and past; use simple present 'If they say that I am wrong' for a real conditional referring to future response. Keep 'I will' in main clause. Suggestion: for first conditional, use present in 'if' clause and 'will' in main clause.