Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid words like “a lot” when a single stronger adjective suffices.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. In my spare time we usually talk about our day and share funny stories, which helps me relax.

提案: Clarify and correct sentence structure; be specific about the topics and use linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., “chat about my friends”).

例: I usually talk to my friends about school, especially subjects I find difficult. For example, if I don't understand a maths problem, I ask them for an explanation or tips.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and coherent reasons. Fix grammar and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “it's a loan”). Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows me to express my opinions more clearly. For instance, in a private conversation I can ask follow-up questions and get more focused feedback.

提案: Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “thoughts” not “tributes”) and give a concise reason plus an example. Keep the answer to one topic sentence and one supporting sentence.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for clearer expression through tone and body language. For example, when discussing something important I can better understand the other person’s feelings in person.

提案: Make the response grammatically correct and concise. State whether you argue, then explain why with a clear reason and brief example. Avoid repetition and correct tense errors.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about school topics, especially when we disagree on answers. For example, we often debate the correct solution to a homework problem until one of us explains our reasoning.

× Definitely, I like chatting a lot with my friends in my spare time.

✓ Definitely, I like chatting a lot with my friends in my spare time.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses present simple to describe a habitual action.

× I usually chat about my friends about my school topics.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about school topics.

The original repeats 'about' and uses incorrect word order. Use 'chat with my friends' (correct preposition) and place the topic 'about school topics' after it. This fixes sentence structure and preposition use.

× Whenever I have any doubt, I chat them about it.

✓ Whenever I have a doubt, I ask them about it.

'Chat them about it' is ungrammatical because 'chat' is intransitive with a preposition 'with'. Use 'chat with them about it' or better 'ask them about it' when referring to resolving doubts. Also change 'any doubt' to 'a doubt' for natural usage.

× Well I give more preference to chat with the single person instead of a group because in a group we cannot share our views properly with anyone.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with a single person instead of a group because in a group we cannot share our views properly.

'Give more preference to' is wordy and unidiomatic; use 'prefer'. 'Chat with the single person' should be 'chat with a single person'. 'With anyone' is unnecessary and confusing; remove it. The corrected sentence simplifies and fixes article and word order issues.

× So if it's a loan we are chat with anyone.

✓ So if it's a one-on-one conversation, we can talk with each other easily.

The original is unclear and contains wrong words ('loan' instead of 'one-on-one' and wrong verb form). Replace with a clear phrase 'one-on-one conversation' and correct verb structure 'we can talk with each other'.

× We can easily talk about any topic.

✓ We can easily talk about any topic.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses modal 'can' to express ability in present tense.

× It is more beneficial to communicate face to face instead of social media because face to face we can easily share our tributes or thoughts with anyone instead of social media.

✓ It is more beneficial to communicate face to face rather than via social media because face to face we can easily share our thoughts with others.

Use 'rather than' to compare options and 'via social media' for the medium. 'Tributes' is incorrect word choice; use 'thoughts'. Use 'others' instead of 'anyone' for natural reference. Also keep 'face to face' hyphenation is optional but phrase is correct as is.

× Definitely, as I'm student we I usually argue with my friends on any school topic whenever they are talk about it is not right answer and I was and I am on the favour of right answer.

✓ Definitely, as a student I usually argue with my friends about school topics when they say something I think is incorrect, and I defend the correct answer.

Multiple errors: missing article before 'student' ('a student'); wrong word order 'we I'; incorrect verb forms 'are talk' and awkward phrasing. Simplify to 'I usually argue... when they say something I think is incorrect' and use 'defend the correct answer' for clarity. Present simple is appropriate for habitual actions.

× That is the argument between us.

✓ That is the source of our arguments.

Original is grammatical but awkward. 'Source of our arguments' is more natural English and clarifies meaning.