Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然但有重复和语法小问题。应更简洁地开门见山，避免重复短语（如“bridge the gap between me and my friends”出现两次），并用更地道的表达。可以用一到两句说明原因并举一例或结果。注意时态与搭配（use ‘reach out to friends’或‘cheer me up’更自然）。

例: Yes, I do. Chatting with friends helps me relieve stress and lift my mood. For example, when I feel down I often reach out to a close friend online and a short chat usually cheers me up.

提案: 内容具体性一般，表达有些啰嗦且部分搭配不自然（如“the former one”可直接说“the news”）。应使用连词使句子更流畅，并给出具体例子或最近的话题。避免绝对词和重复。

例: We often discuss current events, like major international stories or domestic politics, and we also share funny memes or jokes. For instance, last week we were talking about climate policy changes and then switched to sharing a funny video to lighten the mood.

提案: 答案有逻辑但有明显错误和不自然的词汇（如“enjoy the lobsters and tears”不合适，可能是错误短语）。应直接说偏好并给出两到三个清晰原因，避免无意义或错误的比喻，使用连词如“because”或“and”。

例: I prefer chatting in a group because I enjoy lively conversations and the social buzz. Also, group chats let us exchange more ideas and get different perspectives on topics.

提案: 回答清晰并给出对比，但表达可以更地道（use ‘eye contact’ and ‘body language’）并避免重复“bridge our gaps”。可给出具体场景说明何时更倾向于哪种方式。

例: I prefer face-to-face conversations because eye contact and body language make communication clearer and more personal. However, when we're busy or far apart, I use social media since it saves time and helps maintain the relationship.

提案: 观点明确且有例子，但部分表达不准确（如“families attribute to different people”不自然）。建议用更自然的因果表达并说明处理争论的方式（how you resolve them）。

例: Yes, we do sometimes. People come from different backgrounds, so it's natural to have disagreements. For example, my friends and I often debate study methods, but we usually listen to each other and try different approaches until we find what works.

× Absolutely, chatting with friends provides me a chance to release my stress and bridge the gap between me and my friends.

✓ Absolutely. Chatting with friends provides me with a chance to relieve my stress and bridge the gap between my friends and me.

原句中存在多处小问题：1) “provides me a chance”在英语中更常见且更正式的表达是“provides me with a chance”；2) “release my stress”用词不当，常用的搭配是“relieve stress”；3) “bridge the gap between me and my friends”语序更自然的表达是“bridge the gap between my friends and me”。这些改动使主谓宾结构和介词短语更符合英语惯用语。

× I always communicate with my friends online when I feel stressed or depressed, which can always help improve my mood.

✓ I always communicate with my friends online when I feel stressed or depressed, which always helps improve my mood.

原句使用“which can always help improve my mood”时态和语气与主句更自然的搭配是一般现在时：因果关系的结果用“helps”更清楚；去掉“can”使陈述更肯定且与“always”搭配更自然。

× I usually chat about international or national news and some jokes with my friends online.

✓ I usually chat with my friends online about international or national news and jokes.

原句中成分顺序略显不自然，合理的顺序是先表明与谁聊天（with my friends online），然后表明聊天内容；“some jokes”可简化为“jokes”。句子时态为一般现在，保持不变。

× For the former one, it showcases our concentration and focus on our country and the world.

✓ As for the former, it shows our concern and focus on our country and the world.

问题包括词汇搭配与表达冗余：1) “former one”冗余，直接用“the former”或“As for the former”更自然；2) “showcases our concentration”搭配不当，应使用“shows our concern”或“demonstrates our interest”；3) 保持一般现在时。

× For the latter, it obviously and easily bridge the gaps between me and my friends.

✓ As for the latter, it obviously and easily bridges the gaps between my friends and me.

主谓一致错误：主语是“it”，动词需用第三人称单数“bridges”，因此选择问题类型为主谓一致（27）。此外，“between me and my friends”顺序可改为“between my friends and me”更常见。

× I prefer to chat with a group of people.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people.

这里并非必须改为进行时，但“prefer to chat”与后文风格可统一为“prefer chatting”作为习惯性偏好表达也可接受。如果坚持仅改语法错误，可保留原句。此处给出一种更自然的表达。

× On the one hand, it can help me relax and enjoy the lobsters and tears with my friends because I'm a person who enjoys noisy.

✓ On the one hand, it can help me relax and enjoy the laughs and tears with my friends because I'm a person who enjoys noise.

原句有词汇错误和词类使用不当：1) “lobsters”显然与语境不符，应为“laughs”（笑声）或“laughter”；2) “tears”可保留；3) “enjoys noisy”中“noisy”是形容词，需用名词“noise”或改为“being noisy”。因此改为“enjoy the laughs and tears”并将“noisy”改为“noise”或“being noisy”。

× On the other hand, we can share more details and ideas about different issues.

✓ On the other hand, we can share more details and ideas about different issues.

句子本身语法正确，保留原句，仅确认为一般现在时的习惯性表述。此处不作改动。

× I prefer to talk face to face because it can provide some eye contacts or body languages to bridge our gaps.

✓ I prefer to talk face to face because it can provide eye contact and body language to bridge our gaps.

原句中“eye contacts”与“body languages”为不可数名词的错误复数形式，应分别改为“eye contact”和“body language”。时态保持一般现在。

× But if we communicate online, it can also save our energy and time to cultivate the relationship between me and my friends.

✓ But if we communicate online, it can also save our energy and time for cultivating the relationship between my friends and me.

代词使用和介词搭配问题：1) “between me and my friends”习惯上改为“between my friends and me”；2) “save ... to cultivate”搭配不当，常用“save ... for cultivating”或“save ... and help cultivate”。此处改为“save our energy and time for cultivating”。

× Absolutely. Different backgrounds and families attribute to different people, so it is very common for friends to have different opinions on the same issues.

✓ Absolutely. Different backgrounds and family situations lead to different perspectives, so it is very common for friends to have different opinions on the same issues.

句子结构与用词问题：1) “backgrounds and families attribute to different people”语序和搭配错误，正确表达应为“different backgrounds and family situations lead to different perspectives”或“attribute to”用法不当；2) 改为“lead to different perspectives”更清晰自然。保持一般现在时。

× For example, I always argue with my friends on how to study well and get good grades.

✓ For example, I always argue with my friends about how to study well and get good grades.

介词使用错误：英语中常用“argue about”或“argue over”而不是“argue on”来表示就某事争论，因此将“on”改为“about”。时态为一般现在，保留不变。