Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal ancak dağınık. Konu cümlesi net, fakat gereksiz dolgu sözcükleri (umm, actually) ve dil bilgisi hataları ("to chatting", "it can be my favorite activity") var. Cümleleri kısa ve akıcı tut, gereksiz tekrarları çıkar, fiil formlarına dikkat et. Ayrıca bağlaçlarla neden tercih ettiğini kısaca açıkla (ör. because...).

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends; it is one of my favorite activities. However, I prefer talking in person at a café rather than texting on the phone because face-to-face conversation feels more natural and engaging.

提案: İçerik uygun ama yüzeysel ve dağınık. "Blah blah" gibi ifadeler resmi bir konuşmada kullanılmamalı. Dil bilgisi hataları: "our works" yerine "our jobs" veya "work", "more deeper" yerine "deeper". Detay verirken bağlaçlar kullanarak örnek veya bir anekdot ekle.

例: We usually talk about daily life, like what happened at work or school. Sometimes we discuss personal topics such as relationships or future plans; for example, last week we talked about career choices and how one friend is preparing for a job interview.

提案: Fikirler anlaşılır fakat dilbilgisi ve akıcılık geliştirilmelidir. "I prefer chat" yerine "I prefer to chat"; "only one friends" yerine "one friend". Cümleleri bağlaçlarla daha düzgün bağla ve kısa bir gerekçe ekle (ör. because...).

例: If I want to have a deep conversation, I prefer to chat with one friend because it is easier to focus and be open. However, when I want to have fun and be energetic, I prefer chatting in a group.

提案: Cevap tercih belli ancak mantık ve dil bozuk. Dolgu sesleri fazla ve cümle tamamlanmamış. Net bir neden ver, dolgu sözcüklerini azalt ve tam cümle kullan. Örnek vererek açıklamayı genişlet.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for clearer communication and helps me read body language. For example, in person you can understand tone and expressions, which reduces misunderstandings compared to social media.

提案: Ana fikir iletilmiş ama tekrarlamalar ve tamamlanmamış düşünceler var. "Not so much" ve "rarely" ifadeleri çakışıyor; daha kesin bir açıklama ver. Neden normal olduğunu ve nasıl çözdüğünüzü kısaca belirt (ör. by talking calmly). Gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu kelimelerini çıkar.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but it doesn't happen often. I think it is normal because disagreements are natural; usually we resolve them by talking calmly and trying to understand each other's point of view.

× Yes, I like actually it can be my favorite activity with my friends.

✓ Yes, I actually like it; it can be my favorite activity with my friends.

The sentence has word order and tense clarity issues. Move 'actually' before the verb phrase and insert a pronoun 'it' after 'like'. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect the two clauses. Suggestion: place adverbs in natural positions (e.g., 'I actually like it') and ensure each clause has a clear subject and verb.

× But I don't like to chatting with my friends on my phone.

✓ But I don't like chatting with my friends on my phone.

After 'don't like' use the gerund form (verb + ing), not the infinitive with 'to'. The correct structure is 'don't like doing something'.

× I usually prefer chatting with my friends at a cafe.

✓ I usually prefer chatting with my friends at a cafe.

Sentence is acceptable, but keep consistent use of 'prefer' + gerund. No grammatical change needed; provided here for completeness.

× I usually chat about our daily lives, umm and sometimes our dates, our works, our teachers, blah blah umm but sometimes we chat about more deeper topic.

✓ I usually chat about our daily lives, and sometimes about our dates, our jobs, our teachers, but sometimes we chat about deeper topics.

Problems: 'works' is incorrect—use 'jobs' or 'work'; 'more deeper' is ungrammatical (double comparative), use 'deeper'; 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'sometimes'. Also streamline fillers. Keep present simple for habitual actions.

× If I want to talk about deeper conversation, I prefer chat with only one friend.

✓ If I want to have a deeper conversation, I prefer to chat with only one friend.

Use 'have a deeper conversation' or 'talk about a deeper topic'. After 'prefer' with infinitive use 'to' + verb ('prefer to chat') or 'prefer chatting'. Also include article 'a' before 'deeper conversation'.

× About chatting, only one friends can be bored sometimes.

✓ When chatting, being with only one friend can be boring sometimes.

'Friends' should be singular 'friend' to match 'only one'. Also rephrase for natural English: 'being with only one friend can be boring'.

× If I want to enjoy, I prefer group of people.

✓ If I want to enjoy myself, I prefer a group of people.

Add reflexive pronoun 'myself' after 'enjoy' and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'group'. Without article, noun phrase is ungrammatical.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think, umm, communicate via social media, umm. Doesn't my think uh.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think communicating via social media is not the same.

The original has fragmented and ungrammatical clauses. Use gerund 'communicating' after 'think' as the subject of the clause and provide a clear predicate ('is not the same' or 'isn't as good'). Avoid misplaced auxiliary 'doesn't' with 'my'.

× Yes, umm, not so much, but I rarely argue with my friends and I think it's normal.

✓ Yes, not so much; I rarely argue with my friends, and I think that's normal.

Minor punctuation and clarity issues. Use contraction 'that's' or 'it is' for clarity, and proper clause connectors. Tense and structure are present and appropriate.

× I think a lot of people umm, have argued with their friends umm, but I think important one is here umm.

✓ I think a lot of people have argued with their friends, but I think the important thing is how they resolve it.

Original ends with an incomplete clause 'important one is here'. Provide a complete noun phrase 'the important thing' and clarify the point. 'Have argued' is correct present perfect; add clarity for the second clause.