Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: A sua resposta é clara e relevante, mas pode ser mais natural ao evitar repetições e simplificar frases. Concentre-se em uma frase tópica direta seguida de 1–2 frases de apoio com detalhes específicos. Use ligações simples (por exemplo, “because”, “so”) para maior fluidez.

例: Yes, I do. Chatting with friends helps me keep up with their lives and strengthen our bond because we share updates and support each other.

提案: A resposta tem boa estrutura e inclui um exemplo, mas evite repetir a palavra “usually” e torne os detalhes mais específicos (que tipos de desafios? que rotinas?). Use uma ligação para ligar a ideia geral ao exemplo.

例: We often talk about our daily routines and any problems we’re facing; for example, I video-call a close friend once a week to help her plan job applications and offer emotional support.

提案: A ideia está clara, mas a resposta é demasiado curta e contém uma frase incompleta (“I think I don't have”). Amplie com razões precisas e um exemplo curto para completar a resposta e torná-la natural.

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because conversations feel more personal and I can focus better; for instance, I can give undivided attention on a video call when a friend needs advice.

提案: Boa resposta que explica a preferência e a razão. Corrija pequenos erros gramaticais e evite frases desnecessárias; por exemplo, use “face-to-face” sem espaço e torne a frase final mais natural. Use uma ligação clara como “so” para coesão.

例: I prefer social media because I’m often busy, so messaging and video calls let me stay connected even when I can’t meet face-to-face.

提案: A resposta mostra autoconsciência, mas contém expressões confusas (“something that I don't read”) e é redundante. Substitua coloquialismos estranhos por explicações claras e ofereça uma breve alternativa de resolução de conflitos para mostrar maturidade.

例: I try to avoid conflicts and usually stay calm rather than arguing; however, if an issue keeps coming up I prefer to talk it through calmly later so we can resolve it.

× I believe that chatting with friends, it is a nice way to catch up with what's going on in their lives and also to create a bond and connection with them.

✓ I believe that chatting with friends is a nice way to catch up on what's going on in their lives and to create a bond and connection with them.

The sentence uses an unnecessary pronoun subject 'it' after the clause 'chatting with friends', causing redundancy and a broken sentence structure. Remove 'it' so the gerund phrase 'chatting with friends' directly links to the predicate 'is a nice way'. Also, use the correct collocation 'catch up on' rather than 'catch up with'. Suggestion: omit redundant pronouns and use correct prepositional collocations. ','grammar_problem_type_id':12},{

× We usually talk about our lives and catch up in what's going on in each other's daily routine.

✓ We usually talk about our lives and catch up on what's going on in each other's daily routines.

The correct collocation is 'catch up on' not 'catch up in'. Also 'daily routine' should be plural 'daily routines' when referring to each person's routine. Suggestion: use 'catch up on' and match number with 'each other's'. ','grammar_problem_type_id':11},{

× For example, I usually like to video call my friends just to offer some support and help with their challenges.

✓ For example, I usually like video-calling my friends just to offer some support and help with their challenges.

After 'like' it is acceptable to use the gerund form 'video-calling' to describe a habitual preference. Alternatively, 'I usually like to video call' is also acceptable; choose one consistent structure. Suggestion: prefer 'like video-calling' for smoother speech. ','grammar_problem_type_id':8},{

× To be honest, I prefer to chat with only one friend at a time. I think I don't have.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to chat with only one friend at a time. I don't think I have.

The second sentence 'I think I don't have' has incorrect word order and lacks an object; it should be 'I don't think I have' to express doubt about having that preference or ability. Suggestion: place negation before 'think' when expressing a negative opinion about one's own state. ','grammar_problem_type_id':26},{

× I think my life is very busy so sometimes I'm not always available to a face to face catch up in that way.

✓ I think my life is very busy, so sometimes I'm not available for a face-to-face catch-up that way.

The phrase 'not always available' is redundant with 'sometimes'; 'not available' is sufficient. Use 'available for' rather than 'available to' in this context. Also 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective, and 'catch up' as a noun becomes 'catch-up'. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and use correct prepositions and hyphenation for compound adjectives. ','grammar_problem_type_id':11},{

× Messaging and video calling it is essential to make us feel connected.

✓ Messaging and video calling are essential to make us feel connected.

Including 'it' after the subject is ungrammatical and redundant. The compound subject 'Messaging and video calling' requires the plural verb 'are'. Remove 'it' and ensure subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: avoid inserting unnecessary pronouns and match verb number to the subject. ','grammar_problem_type_id':26},{

× I usually take everything on the chin and just nod my head when something that I don't read is going on.

✓ I usually take everything on the chin and just nod my head when something I don't understand is going on.

The phrase 'I don't read' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'I don't understand'. Replace with 'understand'. Also 'when something... is going on' is fine; remove the unnecessary 'that'. Suggestion: choose verbs that match the intended meaning and avoid unnecessary relative pronouns. ','grammar_problem_type_id':11},{

× I know that is not healthy, but I try to not create an argument with them.

✓ I know that is not healthy, but I try not to create an argument with them.

Split infinitive-like placement 'try to not create' is less natural; in negative infinitive constructions, place 'not' before the infinitive 'to create' or use 'try not to create'. Use 'try not to create' which is more idiomatic. Suggestion: use 'try not to' rather than 'try to not'. ','grammar_problem_type_id':13}]}Explanation: The JSON contains many inserted blank artifacts due to formatting but valid entries are included.