Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. “Just even that no”). Use linking words like 'because' or 'but' to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends, but usually only briefly because I prefer to share important news or ask for advice. For example, I might message a friend when I need help planning a trip or to tell them about a promotion.

提案: Give a clear main idea followed by specific topics and an example. Use linking words (for example, such as, and) to make the answer coherent and avoid vague phrases like 'what is news.'

例: We usually talk about daily life and hobbies. For example, we discuss how our day went, upcoming events, and hobbies like cooking or sports, and we also share news about work or family.

提案: Begin with a direct answer (I prefer...). Clarify awkward phrases ('Yes, I do visual' unclear). Give reasons concisely and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Limit to two reasons maximum.

例: I prefer chatting in a group because it feels more relaxed and I don't have to lead the conversation. For instance, in group chats I can listen, react with messages or emojis, and join in when I have something to say.

提案: Answer directly and avoid literal translations. Say 'I prefer face-to-face communication' and give 1–2 clear reasons (e.g. tone, body language). Replace unclear phrase 'make live compensation' with 'speak in person' or 'express myself'.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to read body language and tone, which makes conversations more genuine. For example, I feel more confident expressing my feelings in person than in messages.

提案: Provide a direct answer and explain briefly why or how you argue. Add an example and use linking words like 'sometimes' or 'because' to clarify frequency and reason. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and vague phrases like 'for nothing.'

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my best friend over small things, usually because we have different opinions about plans or habits. For example, we often disagree about how to spend free time, but the arguments are brief and we quickly make up.

× Yes I do. I like chatting with my friends, but not for a long time. Just when I have something I have to tell them or something important. Just even that no, I don't have.

✓ Yes, I do. I like chatting with my friends, but not for long. I only chat when I have something to tell them or something important to share. I usually do not have those occasions.

The student uses awkward phrasing and redundant words that affect present-tense clarity. 'For a long time' should be 'for long' in this context. 'Just when I have something I have to tell them or something important' is ungrammatical and repetitive; use an infinitive phrase 'to tell' and 'to share.' The final fragment 'Just even that no, I don't have' is incomprehensible; rephrase to 'I usually do not have those occasions.' Suggestions: simplify sentences, use infinitive constructions (to tell/to share), and remove redundant fillers. ID:6

× Usually I chat with my friends about their life, their day. We talk about our hobbies like just we share our lives and talk about what is news.

✓ Usually I chat with my friends about their lives and their days. We talk about our hobbies; we share what is new in our lives.

The plural subjects require plural possessive pronouns: 'their life, their day' should be 'their lives and their days.' 'What is news' is an incorrect phrase; use 'what is new' or 'what's new.' Also remove filler 'just' and reorganize for clarity. Suggestions: match number between noun and pronoun, use 'what is new' to report recent events. ID:12

× Yes, I do visual. I prefer to chat with group of people more than with all the work friends, because with group I don't have to talk all time, I don't have to typing for a long time, I have to just listen to them and be silent.

✓ Yes, I do, visually. I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than with individual coworkers, because in a group I don't have to talk all the time; I don't have to type for a long time; I can just listen and be quiet.

Multiple issues: missing articles 'a group' and incorrect phrase 'all the work friends' should be 'individual coworkers' or 'all my work friends.' 'Talk all time' should be 'talk all the time.' 'I don't have to typing' is ungrammatical—use base verb after modal/auxiliary: 'I don't have to type.' 'Just listen to them and be silent' is acceptable but 'be quiet' is more natural. Also 'I do visual' likely intended 'visually' (adverb). Suggestions: use correct articles, correct verb forms after auxiliaries, and more natural word choices. ID:22

× Because I'm authentic person, I prefer to communicate face to face, have more than social media and I feel confident when I make live compensation.

✓ Because I'm an authentic person, I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media, and I feel more confident during live conversation.

Missing indefinite article: 'an authentic person.' 'Face to face' is fine but compare with 'via social media' rather than 'have more than social media.' 'Make live compensation' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'live conversation' or 'in-person interaction.' Use 'more confident during live conversation.' Suggestions: include articles before singular countable nouns, use correct adverbs/phrases ('via social media'), and choose appropriate nouns ('conversation'). ID:6

× Yes I do. Usually I argue with my best friend even in small things. We argue, uh, we talk a lot for nothing.

✓ Yes, I do. Usually I argue with my best friend even about small things. We argue; we often talk a lot about nothing.

Tense is present simple and acceptable, but preposition 'in' should be 'about' in this context: 'argue about small things.' 'We talk a lot for nothing' is non-idiomatic; use 'talk a lot about nothing.' Suggestions: use correct prepositions with verbs ('argue about') and prefer idiomatic phrases ('talk about nothing'). ID:11