Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, use linking words for coherence, and provide one or two specific examples. Aim for 2–4 sentences and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'get updates on their lives', 'we plan our weekends').

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me keep up to date with their lives. For example, we often discuss plans for the weekend and decide whether to visit a new restaurant or go to a nearby park.

提案: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and then give specific examples linked by connectors. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences. Correct grammar (e.g., 'we talk about', 'ups and downs', 'possible trips'). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

例: We usually talk about our daily routines and work. For instance, we discuss challenges at the office, family matters, and possible trips we might take together next month.

提案: Start with a direct answer, then support it with clear reasons and one concise example. Remove fillers and repeated words. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' correctly and fix grammar ('other people's opinions', 'make the right decision').

例: I prefer chatting in a group because we can share different ideas and hear other people's opinions, which helps us make better decisions. However, I sometimes talk one-on-one when I need a private conversation.

提案: Give a direct answer, then add two clear reasons with correct word choices (e.g., 'emotions', 'facial expressions', 'intentions'). Avoid repetition and use linking words like 'because' and 'however'. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read emotions and see facial expressions, which helps you understand someone's intentions. Social media lacks these visual and emotional cues.

提案: Answer directly and explain briefly why, using correct grammar and fewer repetitions. Use linking words like 'when' and 'because', and give a short example of when you might argue. Avoid sounding confrontational—mention constructive discussion or finding the truth.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when I believe a decision is wrong because I want to clarify the facts. For example, if a friend plans something risky, I will explain my concerns and suggest a safer alternative.

× I do like chatting with my friends because I would like to get update of their lives.

✓ I do like chatting with my friends because I would like to get updates on their lives.

'Get update' is incorrect: 'update' needs to be plural ('updates') when referring to multiple pieces of information. Also the correct preposition is 'on' rather than omitted. Suggest learning collocations: 'get updates on/about someone's life.'

× And we do planning for, uh, you know, to plan for our next steps.

✓ We also plan our next steps.

The phrase is wordy and mixes verb forms ('do planning' and 'to plan'). Use a simple verb 'plan' for clarity and correctness. Avoid redundant fillers and conjunction 'And' at sentence start; use 'We also' instead.

× So we do plan in our weekend so we can go for outing or we can have to visit a restaurant or a park.

✓ So we plan on weekends so we can go on an outing or visit a restaurant or a park.

Use 'plan on' or 'plan for' and 'weekends' plural for habitual action. Use 'go on an outing' and 'visit' without 'have to'. Suggest practicing common preposition + noun collocations (plan on weekends, go on an outing).

× We easily chat about our daily activities, our lifestyle, also regarding our job, our working environment, what is the ups and down of the lives is happening.

✓ We often chat about our daily activities, our lifestyles, our jobs and working environments, and the ups and downs in our lives.

Use 'often' instead of 'easily' for frequency. Match plural nouns: 'lifestyles', 'jobs', 'environments'. 'Ups and downs' is the correct idiom and 'in our lives' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggest checking pluralization and idiomatic expressions.

× Also we discussed about our families and the possible tour or possible visit that we could have done in the.

✓ We also discuss our families and possible trips or visits we could take.

Do not use 'discussed about' — 'discuss' does not take 'about'. 'Tour or visit' is better expressed as 'trips or visits'. Remove the unfinished ending 'in the.' Use present tense 'discuss' to match habitual context.

× I do prefer to chat with a group of people because in the group, so we can share lots of ideas and get that get others person opinion regarding the topic.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because in a group we can share many ideas and get other people's opinions on the topic.

Remove redundant 'do' and 'so'. Use 'many ideas' or 'lots of ideas'; 'other people's opinions' is the correct possessive plural form. 'Regarding' can be replaced with 'on' for naturalness. Suggest practicing possessive plural forms and removing unnecessary words.

× So this will help us to, uh, take the right decision.

✓ This helps us make the right decision.

Use 'make' rather than 'take' in this context (collocation: 'make a decision'). Use simple present 'helps' for habitual action. Remove filler words.

× Uh, but sometimes I, uh, talk with the one person only.

✓ But sometimes I talk with just one person.

Use 'just one person' rather than 'the one person only' for natural English. Remove fillers and unnecessary articles.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because you can understand the motion and you can see the facial expression and to understand the motive behind or what is just going on.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because you can understand the emotion, see facial expressions, and understand the motive behind what is happening.

Use 'emotion' instead of 'motion'. Use plural 'expressions'. Simplify structure: 'see facial expressions and understand the motive behind what is happening.' Use correct verb form 'happening' not 'going on' in this context.

× So the visually you can understand what the person is going through.

✓ Visually, you can understand what the person is going through.

Remove the extra article 'the' before 'visually' and place adverb appropriately. Better: 'By seeing them, you can understand...' Ensure adverb placement is correct.

× However, in the social media you don't have that.

✓ However, on social media you don't have that.

Use 'on social media' rather than 'in the social media'. Also omit 'the'. Preposition 'on' is standard collocation.

× I do argue with friends so whenever it's requires.

✓ I do argue with friends whenever it's required.

'It's requires' is grammatically incorrect. Use passive adjective 'required' or rephrase 'when required'. Also removing 'do' makes it more natural: 'I argue with friends when required.'

× If I perceive that that he is wrong or his decision is wrong, then I would definitely argue with the decision and try to establish my point of view to understand that what is right and what is wrong and pointed out that he is wrong.

✓ If I feel that he is wrong or his decision is wrong, I will argue and try to explain my point of view to determine what is right and what is wrong, and point out where he is mistaken.

Multiple issues: remove duplicated 'that', use 'feel' or 'think' instead of 'perceive' for naturalness, use future 'will' for likely action, use 'argue' without 'with the decision', use 'explain my point of view' and 'determine' for clarity. Use 'point out where he is mistaken' instead of awkward phrasing. Suggest simplifying sentences and correcting verb forms and pronoun placement.