Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的だが文法と語順の誤りが多く、内容も曖昧です。まず主節をはっきりさせ（I like chatting with friends）、続けて理由を具体的に述べましょう。接続詞（because, so）や代名詞の一致に注意し、冗長な表現は避けてください。例を一つ加えると説得力が増します。発音と流暢さを高めるために短い文で練習しましょう。

例: I do enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, we often share funny stories or talk about our plans, which lightens my mood.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で話題が整理されていません。まず“usually”に対する明確な話題（school, work, hobbiesなど）を一つ述べ、次に具体例を1つ加えてください。接続語（for example, usually, sometimes）を使って論理をつなぐ練習をしましょう。また語彙を正しく使うこと（"avatar"や"checked worst friend"は意味不明）を重視してください。

例: Usually we talk about our daily lives and plans. For example, if we decide to meet at the weekend, we discuss where to go and what time to meet.

提案: 考えは明確だが表現が不自然で繰り返しがあります。まず簡潔な主文（I prefer one-on-one conversations）を述べ、理由を一つか二つで補足してください。冗長な言い回しや文法ミス（"prefer to with"）を直し、理由は具体例（large groups make me anxious）で示すと良いです。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because large groups make me nervous. For instance, in big gatherings I find it hard to join conversations and feel anxious.

提案: 意見は伝わるが文法と語順の改善が必要です。主張は短い文で明確にし、理由を2点に絞って述べましょう（comfort, non-verbal cuesなど）。“see their friends and motion”は意味が曖昧なので“see facial expressions and body language”のように正確な語彙を使ってください。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I feel more comfortable and relaxed. Also, I can see facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand others better.

提案: 否定の意思は明確だが時制と語法が不適切です。現在の習慣について話すときは現在形（I don't argue）を使い、その理由を簡潔に述べましょう。"I think that enjoyable things only"は不自然なので"I prefer to keep meetings enjoyable"のように言い換え、具体的な例（disagree politely）を加えると説得力が増します。

例: I don't usually argue with my friends because I prefer to keep our meetings enjoyable. If we disagree, we try to discuss it politely and find a compromise.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because my friends makes feel relaxed also.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because my friends make me feel relaxed.

The verb must agree with the plural subject 'friends'. Use 'make' (plural) not 'makes' (singular). Also include the object 'me' after 'make' and place 'also' appropriately if needed. Suggestion: use 'make me feel relaxed' or 'also make me feel relaxed'. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I can't prepare the new perspective.

✓ I can't come up with a new perspective.

The phrase 'prepare the new perspective' is unnatural and causes a sentence structure issue. Use the correct verb phrase 'come up with' to express generating ideas. Ensure verb-object collocation is appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I checked worst friend, avatar all day life and the the. Necessary things.

✓ I talk about things like my worst experiences with friends, avatars, daily life, and other necessary things.

Original fragments lack clear structure and contain repetition ('the the'). Rearrange into a clear list with parallel items and appropriate nouns. Use 'talk about' for ongoing discussion. Grammar problem type ID:26

× For example, when I decided to meet with friend, I will chat.

✓ For example, when I decide to meet a friend, I chat.

Mixing past 'decided' with future 'will chat' creates a tense inconsistency. Match tenses to the habitual action: use present tense 'decide' and 'chat'. Also use 'a friend' for singular and remove unnecessary 'with'. Grammar problem type ID:7

× I prefer to with only one friend because I'm so nervous with a group of people I when I took.

✓ I prefer to be with only one friend because I'm very nervous in a group of people.

Incorrect preposition and extra words cause confusion. Use 'be with' rather than 'prefer to with'. Use 'in a group of people' for the environment. Remove extraneous fragment 'I when I took'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× A lot of people, I'm so nervous.

✓ When there are a lot of people, I get very nervous.

Fragment lacks a clear clause structure. Add a dependent clause 'When there are...' and proper verb 'get' to indicate a state change. Use 'very' rather than 'so' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can talk with different comfortably and relax and I can see their friends and motion so I prefer to.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can talk comfortably and relax, and I can see their expressions and gestures, so I prefer that.

Multiple issues: use 'communicate face to face' (or 'face-to-face') and 'talk comfortably' (adverb placement). 'Different' is incorrect; use 'different people' or remove it. 'Motion' should be 'gestures' or 'expressions'. End with 'prefer that' to complete the idea. Improve word choice and adverb placement. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I didn't argue with a friend because I don't like uh, the argue originally.

✓ I don't argue with friends because I don't like arguments.

Use consistent present tense for habitual behavior. 'Didn't argue' (past) conflicts with general preference. 'The argue' is incorrect noun form; use 'arguments'. Simplify to present simple to express habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:7

× Also when I met with friends, I think that enjoyable things only.

✓ Also, when I meet with friends, I think only about enjoyable things.

Tense inconsistency: 'met' (past) should be 'meet' for habitual actions. Word order is incorrect; place 'only' before 'about' or before 'enjoyable things'. Use 'think only about enjoyable things' for correct word order. Grammar problem type ID:26