Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (use gerunds and articles), and limit to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words like 'because' to explain briefly.

例: Yes, I prefer chatting with friends, especially by text on WhatsApp. I feel more comfortable typing because I’m not a big fan of phone calls, so messaging lets me reply when it’s convenient.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and provide specific topics with linking words (for example, 'we usually talk about...'). Mention recent or concrete examples to make it specific.

例: I usually chat with my one close friend about our shared memories, like times we worked or went out together. Lately we also discuss everyday life updates because we don’t meet as often as before.

提案: Answer directly then explain briefly. Fix grammar (use 'prefer chatting with one friend') and remove hesitations. Give a short reason and possibly a contrast with groups.

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I don’t have many friends and I find one-on-one conversations more comfortable. In contrast, group chats can feel noisy and hard to follow.

提案: Be specific and structured: state preference clearly, then give a reason and an example. Use correct nouns and verbs (video calls, see their children). Avoid repetition.

例: I prefer face-to-face or video calls for close family because seeing expressions makes conversations warmer. For example, I often video-call my mother on WhatsApp to see her children and chat about what they are doing.

提案: Give a clear, confident topic sentence and explain reaction with brief reasons. Avoid too many fillers and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'when' and 'so' to connect ideas.

例: I don’t usually argue with friends because I prefer to avoid conflict. When someone upsets me, I keep my distance and try to calm down before talking, rather than getting into an argument.

× I love to texting, uh, texting and uh, chat, uh, from WhatsApp with my friends.

✓ I love texting and chatting with my friends on WhatsApp.

'Love to texting' is incorrect because after 'love' you should use either the base verb (to love to text) or the gerund (love texting). Also 'chat' should be in the gerund form to match 'texting', and the preposition with the app is 'on WhatsApp'. Use parallel gerunds for clarity.

× Because I am not a calling person, I always use text all messages uh to talk with someone.

✓ Because I am not a calling person, I always use text messages to talk with someone.

'Use text all messages' is ungrammatical. The correct noun phrase is 'text messages'. Maintain simple present tense and natural word order: 'use text messages to talk'.

× Uh, I have only one friend and I, uh, chat with the many changes, uh, about many changes, uh, like, uh, our, our own memories whenever we work together and whenever we go outside together.

✓ I have only one friend, and I chat with her about many things, like our memories of working and going out together.

'The many changes' is incorrect word choice and 'many changes' is not the intended meaning. Use 'many things' or 'many memories'. Also ensure pronoun agreement ('her' for one friend) and concise phrasing.

× But now I'm not a meet, meet her, uh, so many times.

✓ But now I do not meet her so often.

'I'm not a meet' mixes continuous 'I'm' with the base verb 'meet' incorrectly. Use simple present negative 'do not meet' or 'don't meet' with adverb 'so often'.

× No, I am uh, I prefer only one time child because I have no many friends, so I chat with one only one friend.

✓ No, I prefer chatting with only one person because I don't have many friends, so I chat with just one friend.

'Only one time child' is nonsensical. Use 'only one person' or 'one friend'. 'I have no many friends' is incorrect; use 'I don't have many friends'. Maintain consistent word order.

× After time I shop with one one person, not so many persons.

✓ Sometimes I go shopping with one person, not with many people.

'After time' is incorrect; use 'sometimes' or 'occasionally'. 'One one person' is a repetition; 'persons' is formal—use 'people'. Include 'with' before 'many people'.

× Yes, I prefer to communicate Facebook services on video on video call, whether my mother or my sister.

✓ Yes, I prefer to communicate via Facebook video calls with my mother or my sister.

Use the preposition 'via' for means of communication. 'Facebook services on video on video call' is redundant; 'Facebook video calls' is concise and correct. Use 'with' to indicate the person.

× I often call my mother on WhatsApp and to see their children and what they what they are doing.

✓ I often call my mother on WhatsApp to see her children and to find out what they are doing.

Pronoun 'their' mismatches 'my mother'—use 'her'. Remove repeated fragment 'what they'. Use infinitive 'to see' and 'to find out' for purpose.

× We, we whenever we on video call, we, we have a lot of fun there.

✓ Whenever we are on a video call, we have a lot of fun.

Omit filler repetitions. Use 'are on a video call' (present continuous) to describe current habitual action. Keep sentence concise.

× No, uh, I'm sorry, Don't argue with my friends because it is not my type.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends because it's not my type.

'I'm sorry, Don't argue with my friends' is confusing: the speaker should say 'I don't argue with my friends'. Capitalization of 'Don't' is incorrect in mid-sentence. Use contraction 'it's' for 'it is'.

× Uh, whenever, uh, someone hurts me or whenever I don't like to hear, uh, their, their tone or whatever it is, uh, I just, uh, I just maintain distance from them.

✓ Whenever someone hurts me or I don't like their tone or behavior, I keep my distance from them.

Remove fillers and repeated words. Use parallel structure: 'someone hurts me' or 'I don't like their tone'. 'Maintain distance' is correct but 'keep my distance' is more natural. Ensure pronoun 'their' is acceptable for singular generic reference here.

× I don't.

✓ I don't argue with them.

The fragment 'I don't.' is incomplete and ambiguous. Complete the sentence to match context: 'I don't argue with them.' This clarifies the intended meaning.