Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ слишком запутан и содержит грамматические ошибки, повторы и неестественные выражения. Сформулируйте тему прямо, избегайте повторов и исправьте ошибки согласования (например, everyone prefers, I can learn information from my friends). Используйте не более 3–4 предложений и добавьте одно конкретное примечание о том, что вы узнаёте от друзей.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It is fun and helps me relax after a busy day. I also learn useful information from them, such as news, recommendations, or study tips.

提案: Ответ расплывчат, есть паузы, лишние слова и ошибки (hourly? go trip). Будьте конкретнее: назовите 2–3 темы с примерами и используйте связки (for example, also, sometimes). Уберите междометия и повторения, говорите короткими связными предложениями.

例: When we meet, we usually talk about our daily routines and what we have been doing recently. We also discuss future plans, for example arranging trips or making study and work schedules. Sometimes we share recommendations for books, movies or places to eat.

提案: Хорошая идея в ответе, но есть грамматические ошибки и повторы (a tired, my with my, very important twice). Сформулируйте чётко: state preference, give reason and an example. Используйте связки (because, when) и корректную форму слов (I am tired, one friend).

例: It depends on my mood, but when I am tired I prefer talking to just one close friend. That way I can discuss important personal matters calmly, for example decisions about work or studies, without distractions.

提案: Ответ ясен, но содержит паузы и небрежную формулировку (learn many information). Сократите повторы, используйте правильные выражения (learn a lot of information, talk more easily) и добавьте один конкретный пример ситуации для доказательства предпочтения.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more natural and I can understand tone and body language. For example, when discussing a group project at university, meeting in person makes it easier to explain ideas and avoid misunderstandings.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки лексики и структуры (don't like argue → don't like arguing; lie me → lie to me; resilient used incorrectly). Лучше сказать, что вы избегаете конфликтов, но отстаиваете себя при серьёзных нарушениях, и привести пример. Используйте корректные слова и простые конструкции.

例: I usually avoid arguments because I prefer to keep friendly relationships. However, if a friend lies to me or behaves unreasonably, I will confront them calmly and explain why their behavior upset me, for example by pointing out the specific incident.

× Yes, certainly I like chatting with my friends. I think everyone prefer chatting with your friends because this time will be very enjoyable and awesome and I can I can learn more information with to my from my friends which is chatting in.

✓ Yes, I certainly like chatting with my friends. I think everyone prefers chatting with their friends because that time is very enjoyable and I can learn more information from my friends while chatting.

The sentence uses inconsistent and incorrect pronouns ('your friends' instead of 'their friends') and redundant phrases. Use 'everyone' with the singular verb 'prefers' for subject-verb agreement. Replace 'your' with 'their' to match the impersonal 'everyone'. Remove duplicated words ('I can I can') and incorrect prepositions ('with to my from my friends'); use 'learn from my friends while chatting'. Improve clarity by changing 'this time' to 'that time' or 'that time is'.

× OK, when I meet my friends, we usually talk about hourly, our daily routines and what we have been doing.

✓ When I meet my friends, we usually talk about our daily routines and what we have been doing.

'Hourly' is incorrect here; likely intended 'our daily' or 'hourly' is unnecessary. The rest of the clause is fine in present tense. Remove 'hourly' to make the sentence natural.

× And furthermore, uh, when I meet my friends, we usually chat about, uh, future plans such as, uh, go trip, go to the trip and uh, go and uh, make a new plans. Uh, uh, for example, uh, get.

✓ Furthermore, when I meet my friends, we usually chat about future plans such as going on a trip and making new plans.

Use gerund forms ('going on a trip') after 'such as' to list activities. 'Go trip' and 'go to the trip' are incorrect collocations. Also use 'making new plans' rather than 'make a new plans' (plural mismatch). Remove filler words for clarity.

× OK, it depends on my mood. When I am a tired, I prefer to chat with my with my only one best friend, because I was very tired and I can talk about a very important, very important decisions and I can talk about my daily routines with only one friend.

✓ It depends on my mood. When I am tired, I prefer to chat with my one best friend, because I am very tired and I can talk about very important decisions and my daily routines with just one friend.

Do not use the article 'a' before 'tired' (use adjective 'tired' alone). Use 'one best friend' or 'my only best friend' — 'only one best friend' is awkward; 'just one friend' is clearer. Maintain consistent tense: use 'I am very tired' not 'I was' when speaking generally. Remove duplicate words and incorrect articles ('a very important, very important decisions' -> 'very important decisions').

× OK, I prefer to communicate face to face. Uh, the reason why I prefer to communicate face to face is that I can, uh, talk about, I can learn many information in face to face and I can speak easily, easily. And if I have a choice opportunity, I always choose to communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. The reason is that I can talk and learn a lot of information in face-to-face conversations, and I can speak more easily. If I have the choice, I always choose face-to-face communication.

Use 'learn a lot of information' or 'learn much information' instead of 'learn many information' (uncountable noun). Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' as adjective; 'in face to face' should be 'in face-to-face conversations'. 'Choice opportunity' is redundant; use 'the choice' or 'the choice/opportunity' — 'If I have the choice' is natural. Remove repeated words.

× OK, I don't like argue with my friends, uh, because I am considered a resilient person, uh, and uh, nevertheless, if my friends, uh, lie me, lie me, I always argue with my friends about, uh, about the, their, uh, mistake.

✓ I don't like arguing with my friends because I consider myself a patient person; however, if my friends lie to me, I always argue with them about their mistakes.

Use the gerund 'arguing' after 'don't like'. 'Considered a resilient person' is awkward; use 'I consider myself a patient person' or 'I am generally patient'. The verb 'lie' needs the preposition 'to' when the object is a person ('lie to me'). Use 'them' instead of repeating 'my friends'. Use 'their mistakes' for possessive plural. 'Nevertheless' is better replaced by 'however' in this context.