Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장이 매우 불완전하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 먼저 주제문을 명확히 말하고, 이유를 1~2개로 한정해 간결하게 설명하세요. 연결어(for example, so, because)를 자연스럽게 사용하고, 대명사와 시제 일치를 확인하세요. 또한 불필요한 반복을 피하고 최대 3문장으로 답을 구성하세요. 예: “Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it’s convenient and helps us stay in touch when we’re busy.”

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it’s convenient when we don’t have time to meet. For example, we often text short updates about our day, which helps us stay connected.

提案: 내용이 모호하고 단어 선택이 부정확합니다. 먼저 주제문으로 '우리가 주로 나누는 대화 주제'를 밝히고, 구체적인 예(일상, 계획, 소식)를 하나나 두 개 제시하세요. 연결어(for example, sometimes)를 사용하여 문장 흐름을 매끄럽게 하세요. 발음/단어 선택이 불확실할 때는 쉬운 표현을 사용해도 괜찮습니다.

例: We usually chat about everyday things. For example, we ask each other what we’re doing, where we are, and sometimes we share news or interesting stories.

提案: 의도를 분명히 표현해야 합니다(단체 vs 개인). 혼동되는 표현과 문법 오류를 바로잡고 이유를 1~2개로 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어(because, so, therefore)를 올바르게 사용하고, 모호한 단어('father' 등)는 피하세요.

例: I prefer chatting with a small group of close friends because it’s more fun and we can get different opinions. However, for personal matters I usually prefer one-on-one conversations.

提案: 의견은 분명하지만 이유들이 논리적이지 않고 약간 모순됩니다(대면이 시간·비용을 절약한다는 주장). 이유를 현실적으로 정리하고 구체적 예를 추가하세요. 또한 문장 수를 2~3문장으로 제한하고 불필요한 반복을 제거하세요.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it’s clearer and more personal. For example, meeting in person helps avoid misunderstandings since you can use body language and tone.

提案: 단호한 답변은 괜찮지만 표현이 중복되고 어색합니다. 간단한 주제문으로 시작한 뒤 이유를 1~2개 구체적으로 제시하세요(예: 서로 솔직하게 말함, 이해심이 많음). 부정문을 반복하기 보다는 긍정적 묘사로 바꾸면 더 자연스럽습니다.

例: No, I don’t usually argue with my friends because we are honest and try to understand each other. If a disagreement happens, we talk calmly and resolve it quickly.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends.

The sentence ends with 'because' but does not provide a reason, creating a sentence fragment. Remove the unfinished 'because' or complete the clause. For example: 'Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax.' Ensure every 'because' clause has a following reason.

× You don't have the time to face to face.

✓ We don't have time to meet face to face.

'You don't have the time to face to face' is ungrammatical and unclear. Change the subject to 'we' to match context, use 'have time' without 'the', and use 'meet face to face' as the correct verb phrase. Maintain subject consistency.

× So if I don't have to say something, we just text me my friends.

✓ So if I don't have anything to say, I just text my friends.

Original has incorrect structure and pronoun order 'text me my friends'. Use 'anything to say' for negative content and correct verb-object order: 'text my friends'. Use 'I' as subject for consistency.

× Umm, we don't have any topic but just daily kisser.

✓ Umm, we don't have any topic; we just talk about daily things.

'Daily kisser' is incorrect and likely a mischoice of words. Replace with 'daily things' and use 'talk about' instead of 'kisser'. Use punctuation or conjunction to join clauses properly.

× What are you doing for us about what are you doing or where are you?

✓ We ask each other questions like 'What are you doing?' or 'Where are you?','explanation':'The original is confused and repeats phrases. Clarify by describing the typical questions and use proper quotation marks for reported speech. Ensure clear clause structure. '

The original is confused and repeats phrases. Clarify by describing the typical questions and use proper punctuation for reported speech. Ensure clear clause structure.

× Sometimes someone have uh in someone have a news.

✓ Sometimes someone has news to share.

Use singular verb 'has' with singular subject 'someone'. Remove disfluencies like 'uh' and redundant phrasing 'in someone have a news'. Use 'news' without an article.

× Actually, I prefer to chat with a good about people because.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with a small group of close friends.

Original contains incorrect phrase 'a good about people' and unfinished 'because'. Replace with clear noun phrase 'a small group of close friends' and remove unfinished conjunction. Ensure the sentence is complete and meaningful.

× I don't like text too much so I enjoy to just look at the text so.

✓ I don't like texting too much, so I prefer just reading the messages.

Use the gerund 'texting' instead of noun 'text' and avoid infinitive 'to just look'. Replace with 'reading the messages' for clarity. Also combine clauses with a comma before 'so'.

× I prefer the father.

✓ I prefer the former.

'Father' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'former' (the first option). Use correct vocabulary to convey preference between two options.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it is more convenient and you can help me to save extra time and money.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is more convenient and helps me save time and money.

Remove unnecessary article 'the' and 'extra' is redundant. Use 'helps me save' instead of 'you can help me to save' to make sentence general rather than addressing listener. Keep verbs consistent.

× And it it is more faster to talk about something.

✓ And it is faster to talk about something.

Do not use double 'it it'. Use 'faster' without 'more' because 'faster' is the comparative form of 'fast'. Alternatively 'more quickly' could be used. Also avoid vague 'something' if possible.

× Umm, no I do not. We don't have. We didn't we? We don't have any issue to argue each other and we don't have to lie.

✓ Umm, no, I don't. We haven't had any issues to argue about, and we don't lie to each other.

Original has fragmented sentences and incorrect tense mix. Use present perfect 'haven't had' for unspecified past experiences, or simple present 'don't have' for current state. 'Argue each other' should be 'argue about' and 'lie to each other' is correct reciprocal construction. Remove unnecessary fragments like 'We don't have. We didn't we?'.

× We don't like to fight.

✓ We don't like to fight.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no correction needed. Keep as is if intended meaning is 'we avoid fighting.'