Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不准确。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用更准确的词汇表达。

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear uniforms during classes, and the use of mobile phones is prohibited.

提案: 回答内容重复且表达不流畅，逻辑不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子表达观点，避免重复，并提供具体理由。

例: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students. Too many rules can increase stress and limit their freedom to explore and learn independently.

提案: 回答较为简单，表达有些重复且不够连贯。建议使用更丰富的词汇，结构更清晰，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, my English teacher is excellent. She not only helps students improve their language skills but also supports them in dealing with personal challenges.

× my school made many different kinds of use for students in different aspects of daily life under school life.

✓ My school made many different kinds of rules for students in different aspects of daily life at school.

这里的 'use' 应该是复数形式 'uses'，但根据上下文，实际上应该是 'rules'（规则），因为句子想表达学校为学生制定了许多不同的规则。'use' 用法不当，需改为 'rules'。

× we must wear uniform during the class and the mobile phones are not allowed to use.

✓ We must wear uniforms during class and mobile phones are not allowed to be used.

'wear uniform' 中 'uniform' 应为复数 'uniforms'，因为指的是学生穿校服。'during the class' 中 'the' 不需要，改为 'during class'。'mobile phones are not allowed to use' 结构错误，正确应为 'are not allowed to be used'，因为这里是被动语态。

× No, I don't think it is good for students because I think it maybe makes students more stressful because, you know, it always gives them a sense of security and they they must think they can't do many different kinds of things.

✓ No, I don't think it is good for students because I think it may make students more stressed because, you know, it always gives them a sense of security and they must think they can't do many different kinds of things.

'maybe' 应为情态动词 'may'，后接动词原形 'make'。'more stressful' 应改为 'more stressed'，因为这里形容学生的感受。重复的 'they' 应去掉。

× She always can help people to improve their language ability plus in their life she always likes like to help people to deal with some difficult things.

✓ She can always help people improve their language ability, and in their life, she always likes to help people deal with some difficult things.

'She always can' 语序不自然，应为 'She can always'。'likes like to help' 重复，应去掉一个 'like'。'help people to improve' 中 'to' 可省略。句子结构需调整使其更通顺。