Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer addresses the question but could be more natural and coherent. Avoid sentence fragments and redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use the plural form 'homework' without 's'.

例: Yes, students must follow several rules, such as adhering to the dress code and maintaining good attendance. For example, they need to arrive to classes on time and complete their homework regularly.

提案: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors, and the ideas are not clearly expressed. Use correct words ('rules' instead of 'roles'), and clarify your points with linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'to the future world'.

例: Yes, I believe more rules can help students develop important skills. For instance, rules teach them how to meet deadlines and prioritize tasks, which are essential for their future careers.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid vague words like 'perfect' and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to provide a specific example to support your opinion.

例: Yes, I think many teachers perform their jobs well because they understand their responsibilities. For example, they stay organized and explain lessons clearly, which helps students learn effectively.

× Yes, students have to follow certain rules like dress code and maintaining. Attendance.

✓ Yes, students have to follow certain rules like dress code and maintaining attendance.

The period between 'maintaining' and 'Attendance' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. Also, 'maintaining attendance' is a phrase that should be continuous without a period. The preposition 'and' correctly connects the two items in the list.

× They have to show up to classes on time and do their homeworks.

✓ They have to show up to classes on time and do their homework.

The word 'homework' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'homeworks' is incorrect. The correct form is 'homework' regardless of quantity.

× Yes, roles are a part of molding a child into a well focused individual to the future world.

✓ Yes, rules are a part of molding a child into a well-focused individual for the future world.

The word 'roles' is incorrect here; it should be 'rules' as per context. Also, 'well focused' should be hyphenated as 'well-focused' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. The preposition 'to' should be 'for' to correctly express purpose or destination.

× It has a huge impact on the student in a very young age of how to meet deadlines and what to prioritize in.

✓ It has a huge impact on the student at a very young age regarding how to meet deadlines and what to prioritize.

The phrase 'in a very young age' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to age. The ending 'what to prioritize in' is incomplete and awkward; it should be 'what to prioritize' or 'what to prioritize in life' for clarity.

× Yes, I feel most of the teachers are perfect in their job.

✓ Yes, I feel most of the teachers are perfect in their jobs.

The pronoun 'their' refers to 'teachers' which is plural, so the noun should also be plural 'jobs' to maintain agreement.

× They know their role and responsibilities and what they have to do.

✓ They know their roles and responsibilities and what they have to do.

Since 'they' refers to multiple teachers, 'role' should be pluralized to 'roles' to agree with the plural subject.