Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
First, don't be late.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
I think yes, because the rules are better for students.
試験官
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
受験者
Yes, I have a Georgian teacher who is one of the kindest people I have ever met and she's very kind and always explains difficult topics which helps me understand the lessons better better.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 50.0提案: თქვენი პასუხი ძალიან მოკლეა და არ არის ბუნებრივი ან ეფექტური. სცადეთ პირდაპირ უპასუხოთ კითხვას და შემდეგ დაამატოთ დამატებითი დეტალები, რათა პასუხი უფრო მდიდარი და ლოგიკური გახდეს.
例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must not be late to class, as punctuality is important for learning. Additionally, we are required to respect teachers and keep the school clean.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 40.0提案: თქვენი პასუხი არ არის საკმარისად კონკრეტული და არ იყენებს ლინკინგ სიტყვებს. გირჩევთ გამოიყენოთ უფრო კონკრეტული მიზეზები და ლინკინგ სიტყვები, რათა პასუხი იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და ეფექტური.
例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they can help maintain discipline and create a better learning environment. For instance, rules about using mobile phones in class could reduce distractions.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
スコア: 65.0提案: თქვენი პასუხი შეიცავს განმეორებას და ცოტა არ არის ბუნებრივი. გირჩევთ თავიდან აიცილოთ განმეორებები და გამოიყენოთ ლინკინგ სიტყვები, რათა პასუხი იყოს უფრო სუფთა და ლოგიკური.
例: Yes, I have a Georgian teacher who is very kind and patient. She always explains difficult topics clearly, which helps me understand the lessons better and improves my learning experience.
文法
× I think yes, because the rules are better for students.
✓ I think yes, because rules are better for students.
The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'rules' when speaking generally. In English, when referring to things in general, we often omit the definite article. Here, 'rules' refers to rules in general, so 'the' should be removed.
× ...and she's very kind and always explains difficult topics which helps me understand the lessons better better.
✓ ...and she's very kind and always explains difficult topics which help me understand the lessons better.
The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'difficult topics' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'help' instead of singular 'helps'. Also, the word 'better' is repeated twice, which is redundant and should be corrected to a single 'better'.
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