Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。より明確で簡潔な表現を使い、文法を正しくすることが必要です。例えば、"My school has a rule that only students who have a car can park on campus."のように答えると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, my school has a rule that only students who own cars are allowed to park on the school premises.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な理由や例を明確に述べ、論理的に話を展開する練習が必要です。例えば、"Yes, more rules can help students focus better because they reduce distractions."のように答えると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they can help maintain discipline and reduce distractions during class.

提案: 文法の誤りと不完全な文が目立ちます。主語と動詞の一致に注意し、文を完結させることが重要です。例えば、"My tennis teacher encourages me to study harder and join the tennis club after school."のように答えると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, my tennis teacher encourages me to study harder and also motivates me to join the tennis club after school.

× My school has a rule that someone who has a can park their cars in the school.

✓ My school has a rule that someone who has a car can park their car in the school.

The word 'cars' should be singular 'car' because 'someone' refers to a single person who would park one car. Also, 'a can' is incorrect; it should be 'a car'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× For example, if we if we do throughout there are no travel and.

✓ For example, if we do that, there will be no travel.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear, with repeated words and missing parts. The correction provides a clearer, grammatically correct sentence. This is a sentence structure error.

× So then my teacher who teach tennis, he encourage me to study more and join the tennis after the after school.

✓ So then my teacher who teaches tennis, he encourages me to study more and join tennis after school.

The verbs 'teach' and 'encourage' need to be in the third person singular form 'teaches' and 'encourages' to agree with the singular subject 'my teacher'. Also, 'the tennis' and 'after the after school' are incorrect; 'join tennis after school' is correct. This is a third person singular issue.