Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally relevant but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to 3-4 sentences.

例: Yes, I often go to the library to read books and learn new things. It helps me increase my knowledge and also gives me mental peace, which improves my mood.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Make sure to complete your sentences and provide specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I usually read books about the human body because they provide interesting and detailed knowledge. For example, I learn about different organs and their functions.

提案: Your answer has tense inconsistency and some awkward phrasing. Use past tense when talking about the past and try to combine sentences to avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. It was very helpful for me because reading books made me happy.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to express your opinion clearly and use correct word order. Also, avoid repeating similar words unnecessarily.

例: I am not sure, but I think Chinese kids sometimes go to the library. However, they may not go often because they have many extracurricular activities.

× Yes, I often go to library to read books and learning new things from book.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read books and learn new things from books.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' and 'books'. Also, 'learning' should be in base form 'learn' to match the verb 'go'. 'Book' should be plural 'books' to match the context. In English, we use 'the' before specific places like 'library'. Also, when listing activities, verbs should be in the same form.

× Yes, I often go to library to read books and learning new things from book.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read books and learn new things from books.

After 'to' (infinitive marker), the verb should be in base form, not '-ing' form. So 'learning' should be 'learn'. In English, after 'to' as part of an infinitive, the verb is base form.

× Yes, I often go to library to read books and learning new things from book.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read books and learn new things from books.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple books. In English, when talking about more than one item, plural form is used.

× It is very helpful for to increase my knowledge and.

✓ It is very helpful to increase my knowledge.

The phrase 'for to increase' is incorrect; it should be 'to increase'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' In English, 'helpful' is followed by 'to' plus base verb, and sentences should be complete.

× Books gives us mental peace and improves our mood.

✓ Books give us mental peace and improve our mood.

'Books' is plural, so the verbs should be 'give' and 'improve' without 's'. In English, plural subjects take base form verbs without 's'.

× I usually read books related to.

✓ I usually read books related to the human body.

The sentence is incomplete; it should specify what the books are related to. In English, sentences should be complete and clear.

× Human body they gives me interesting knowledge about human body and the name of.

✓ The human body gives me interesting knowledge about the human body and its parts.

'They' is incorrect pronoun for 'human body' which is singular; 'gives' is correct for singular subject. The sentence is incomplete and unclear. In English, pronouns must agree with their antecedents in number; sentences should be complete.

× Yes, I often go to library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid.

The action happened in the past, so 'go' should be 'went'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library'. In English, past events require past tense verbs.

× Yes, I often go to library when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library'. In English, 'the' is used before specific places like 'library'.

× When I go to library, reading books gives me happiness.

✓ When I go to the library, reading books gives me happiness.

The definite article 'the' is missing before 'library'. In English, 'the' is used before specific places.

× I don't know. But I think Chinese kids often go to the library sometimes, but they don't go usually in the library because there are extra curriculum.

✓ I don't know. But I think Chinese kids sometimes go to the library, but they don't usually go because of extracurricular activities.

The adverbs 'sometimes' and 'usually' are misplaced; 'extra curriculum' should be 'extracurricular activities'. In English, adverbs have specific positions; 'extracurricular' is the correct adjective for activities outside the curriculum.