Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Try to use correct verb forms and connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar points.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it enhances my knowledge and provides me with valuable experiences. Moreover, I love reading books as it is my favourite hobby.

提案: Your answer has good content but the sentence structure is a bit awkward and some phrases are unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your points. Also, be specific about the types of books you read.

例: I usually go to the library because I need a peaceful place to relax. I enjoy reading books, especially mysterious novels and funny comics. For example, I often read comics about celebrities, which I find very entertaining.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tenses and avoid repetition. Also, try to give a clear reason and link your ideas logically.

例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child because I loved playing cricket. Since I did not have any interest in reading books back then, I never had the opportunity to visit the library.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks confidence. Avoid contradicting statements and try to express your opinion clearly. Use linking words to organise your ideas and be specific.

例: I am not sure about the habits of Chinese children regarding libraries. However, I believe that children everywhere should visit libraries regularly to improve their knowledge, as it is very important for their education.

× Yes, I often go to library because it enhance my knowledge as well as I gain many experience from that.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it enhances my knowledge as well as I gain much experience from that.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Many experience' is incorrect because 'experience' is an uncountable noun; 'much experience' is correct.

× Yes, I often go to library because it enhance my knowledge as well as I gain many experience from that.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it enhances my knowledge as well as I gain much experience from that.

The verb 'enhance' must be in the third person singular form 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I often go to library because it enhance my knowledge as well as I gain many experience from that.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it enhances my knowledge as well as I gain much experience from that.

'Experience' is an uncountable noun, so 'many' is incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'much'.

× Well, I need a peaceful place and I go to library.

✓ Well, I need a peaceful place and I go to the library.

'Library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'.

× I love to read books by which I feel relaxed and I have a great interest in mysterious and funny comics.

✓ I love to read books, which makes me feel relaxed, and I have a great interest in mysterious and funny comics.

The phrase 'by which' is incorrect here; 'which makes me feel relaxed' is the correct relative clause to express cause and effect.

× So I usually read comics and mysterious books of the celebrities in the library.

✓ So I usually read comics and mysterious books about celebrities in the library.

The phrase 'books of the celebrities' is awkward; 'books about celebrities' is more natural. Also, 'the library' is correct here as it refers to a specific place.

× No, I've never seen the library in my childhood as I love to play cricket.

✓ No, I never went to the library in my childhood as I loved to play cricket.

'I've never seen' is present perfect and not appropriate for a past time reference like 'in my childhood'. 'Never went' is the correct simple past tense. Also, 'love' should be 'loved' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Well I didn't have any hobbies related to reading books so I didn't get a chance in my childhood to go went to library.

✓ Well, I didn't have any hobbies related to reading books, so I didn't get a chance in my childhood to go to the library.

'Go went' is incorrect; only 'go' is needed after 'to'. Also, 'the library' requires the definite article. The sentence is in past tense, so 'didn't have' and 'didn't get' are correct.

× No, I don't have knowledge about China.

✓ No, I don't have knowledge about China.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I think they often go to library or not.

✓ I think they often go to the library or not.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Well, I think all the children go to library to enhance their knowledge.

✓ Well, I think all the children go to the library to enhance their knowledge.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× According to me it's mandatory for all to go to library.

✓ According to me, it's mandatory for all to go to the library.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.