Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), you should answer directly and clearly. Instead of just naming the library, explain how often you go and why. For example, say 'Yes, I often go to the library to study and read books.'

例: Yes, I often go to the library to study and read books because it is quiet and has many resources.

提案: Try to use linking words and more natural expressions. For example, say 'I usually read books and borrow some to take home.' This makes your answer smoother and more natural.

例: I usually read books there, and I also borrow some to take home and read later.

提案: Be careful with grammar and clarity. Instead of 'when I was quick,' say 'when I was a child.' Also, use past tense consistently. For example, 'Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library to read storybooks.'

例: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library to read storybooks because I loved stories.

提案: Try to answer the question more fully and politely. You can say, 'I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Cambodia, many children go to the library to study.' This shows you understand the question and give a related answer.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Cambodia, many children often go to the library to study and read books.

× Yeah, when I was quick, I go to the library, go to read a storybook.

✓ Yeah, when I was young, I went to the library to read storybooks.

The original sentence uses 'was quick' which is incorrect; it should be 'was young' to indicate childhood. Also, 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was young'. The phrase 'go to read a storybook' is awkward; it is better to say 'to read storybooks'. This correction aligns verb tenses and improves clarity.

× Oh, I don't know, because I Cambodian.

✓ Oh, I don't know, because I am Cambodian.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to link the subject 'I' with the complement 'Cambodian'. Without 'am', the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. Adding 'am' corrects the sentence structure.