Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a more complete and natural answer by directly responding to the question and providing a bit more detail. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and clarify what 'Labyrinth' is if it is a specific place.

例: Yes, I often go to the library near my home called Labyrinth because it has a quiet environment perfect for studying.

提案: Use correct grammar and more natural phrasing. Instead of 'do reading books,' say 'read books.' Also, add more details to make your answer richer and more specific.

例: I usually read books in the library, especially novels and academic materials that help me with my studies.

提案: Avoid repeating words and use past tense consistently. Also, explain your answer more naturally and clearly.

例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child because I did not enjoy reading at that time.

提案: Try to answer the question more clearly and use correct grammar. If you don't know, you can say so politely and briefly without repeating words or incorrect phrases.

例: I'm not sure about that because I don't have much information about how often Chinese kids go to the library.

× I usually do reading books.

✓ I usually read books.

The verb 'do' should not be followed by the gerund 'reading' in this context. Instead, the correct verb is 'read' to express the action of reading books. Using 'do reading' is incorrect; simply say 'read books'.

× No, no, because I hate reading when I was a child.

✓ No, no, because I hated reading when I was a child.

The verb 'hate' should be in the past tense 'hated' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a child.' Using present tense 'hate' with a past time reference is incorrect.

× I don't know because I haven't. I haven't information about Chinese kids to go library.

✓ I don't know because I don't have information about Chinese kids going to the library.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'I haven't' is incomplete; it should be 'I don't have.' Also, 'information about Chinese kids to go library' is incorrect; it should be 'information about Chinese kids going to the library.' The gerund 'going' correctly expresses the action.