Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'to be very honest' and 'moreover'. Also, use correct prepositions and articles, for example, say 'the library' instead of 'library'. Try to link your ideas smoothly.

例: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one in my hometown. Instead, I usually get all the materials I need from the Internet.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words like 'however' or 'when'. Also, avoid repetition and improve vocabulary, for example, use 'improves' instead of 'enhances' if more natural.

例: I don't usually go to the library now, but when I was in school, I often borrowed old quiz books because they helped me think creatively and outside the box.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Use past tense consistently and clarify your meaning. Avoid vague phrases like 'there was a period in my school of library in which they cap'. Instead, give a clear and specific answer with supporting details.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because my school had a library period where we could read and borrow books.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. It's better to answer directly and politely if you don't know. Avoid incorrect phrases like 'Their children's they go library'.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese children because I am from India, so I don't know much about their habits regarding libraries.

× I do not go to library because there is an unavailability of library in my hometown and moreover, due to the Internet accessible, I usually grab all the material from the Internet or any other website.

✓ I do not go to the library because there is no library in my hometown and moreover, since the Internet is accessible, I usually get all the material from the Internet or other websites.

The phrase 'there is an unavailability of library' is incorrect; instead, use 'there is no library' to express absence. Also, 'due to the Internet accessible' is incorrect; it should be 'since the Internet is accessible' to correctly use the verb 'to be' and preposition. Additionally, 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it refers to a specific place.

× I do not go to library because there is an unavailability of library in my hometown and moreover, due to the Internet accessible, I usually grab all the material from the Internet or any other website.

✓ I do not go to the library because there is no library in my hometown and moreover, since the Internet is accessible, I usually get all the material from the Internet or other websites.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect.

× due to the Internet accessible

✓ since the Internet is accessible

The phrase 'due to the Internet accessible' is incorrect because 'due to' should be followed by a noun or noun phrase. Here, 'accessible' is an adjective, so the correct form is 'since the Internet is accessible' to express cause properly.

× I don't go library but when in my school I went to library, I just usually pick up the comedic old quiz books because it enhances my creativity level and and help me to think out-of-the-box.

✓ I don't go to the library but when I was in school, I went to the library and usually picked up the old comic quiz books because they enhanced my creativity and helped me to think out-of-the-box.

The phrase 'go library' and 'went to library' miss the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'in my school' is better expressed as 'when I was in school'. The verb tenses should be consistent in past tense when referring to past events. 'Comedic old quiz books' is better as 'old comic quiz books' for correct adjective order and meaning.

× I just usually pick up the comedic old quiz books because it enhances my creativity level and and help me to think out-of-the-box.

✓ I usually picked up the old comic quiz books because they enhanced my creativity and helped me to think out-of-the-box.

The adjective 'comedic' is not appropriate here; 'comic' is the correct adjective for books with humor. Also, 'just usually' is redundant; 'usually' suffices. The verbs 'enhances' and 'help' should agree with plural subject 'books' and be in past tense to match the context.

× I just usually pick up the comedic old quiz books because it enhances my creativity level and and help me to think out-of-the-box.

✓ I usually picked up the old comic quiz books because they enhanced my creativity and helped me to think out-of-the-box.

Since the action refers to past events, the verbs should be in past tense: 'picked up', 'enhanced', and 'helped'. Also, subject-verb agreement requires plural verbs for 'books'.

× Yes, I can say that the when I was a kid, I go to library because there was a period in my school of library in which they cap.

✓ Yes, I can say that when I was a kid, I went to the library because there was a period in my school when the library was open.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Go to library' requires the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'there was a period in my school of library in which they cap' is unclear and likely incorrect; it is corrected to 'there was a period in my school when the library was open' for clarity and correctness.

× I go to library

✓ I went to the library

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect.

× Their children's they go library.

✓ Their children go to the library.

The phrase 'Their children's they' is incorrect; 'children's' is possessive and unnecessary here. The correct subject is 'Their children'. Also, 'go library' requires the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× Their children's they go library.

✓ Their children go to the library.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating movement towards a place. Omitting 'to' is incorrect.