Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and effective by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to combine your points into fewer sentences and add a concluding sentence to make your response more coherent.

例: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading e-books or online articles at home, as it's more convenient and saves time.

提案: Your answer is direct and relevant, but you can improve it by adding more specific supporting details and using linking words to enrich your response.

例: I usually go to the library to study because it is quiet and free from distractions, which helps me concentrate better on my work.

提案: Your answer is clear and provides reasons, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and making the response more natural and fluent.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there wasn't one nearby, and I preferred playing outside instead.

提案: Your answer is too brief and does not directly address the question. Try to give an opinion or general information even if you are unsure, and use polite language to express uncertainty.

例: I'm not entirely sure, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library to study or read books, especially those who enjoy learning.

× I prefer to read e-book or online articles at home.

✓ I prefer to read e-books or online articles at home.

The word 'e-book' is countable and should be pluralized to 'e-books' when referring to more than one. Using the singular form without an article is incorrect here. To improve, use the plural form 'e-books' to match the plural 'online articles'.

× I don't have ideas.

✓ I don't have any ideas.

The phrase 'I don't have ideas' is incorrect because 'ideas' is a countable noun and requires a quantifier. Adding 'any' before 'ideas' correctly expresses the negative meaning. To improve, use 'I don't have any ideas'.