Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct prepositions and sentence structure. Also, add a bit more detail to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my city. Instead, I usually read books at home or online.

提案: Your answer repeats the same idea and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer the question directly with a topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb forms and articles.

例: I usually don't go to the library because there isn't one near my city. Therefore, I research online and read books at home, as I have many books there.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical errors and is unclear. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structure. Provide a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words to improve coherence.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid. Instead, my parents gave me many books to read at home, so I didn't need to visit a library.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to understand the question and respond directly with a clear opinion. Use complete sentences and relevant vocabulary.

例: No, I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because many prefer using the internet or reading books at home.

× No, I don't go to the library because I don't have a library in nearby my city.

✓ No, I don't go to the library because I don't have a library near my city.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'nearby my city'. The correct preposition is 'near' to indicate proximity. 'Nearby' is an adjective or adverb and should not be preceded by 'in' in this context.

× No, I don't use library because I don't have nearby library in my city.

✓ No, I don't use the library because I don't have a nearby library in my city.

The phrase 'nearby library in my city' is incorrect. 'Nearby' should directly modify 'library' and the article 'a' is needed before 'nearby library'. Also, 'in' is correctly used here to indicate location within the city.

× I only research online and reading a book here because a lot of book in my home.

✓ I only research online and read books here because there are a lot of books in my home.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' to match 'a lot of'. Also, 'reading' should be changed to 'read' to maintain parallel verb structure with 'research'. Additionally, 'there are' is needed before 'a lot of books' to form a correct sentence.

× No, I go don't go library.

✓ No, I don't go to the library.

The phrase 'go don't go library' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I don't go to the library'. The preposition 'to' is necessary after 'go' when indicating a destination.

× When I was a kid my parents gave me a lot of books at my home because I don't go library.

✓ When I was a kid, my parents gave me a lot of books at my home because I didn't go to the library.

The verb tense should be consistent in the past. 'Don't go' should be changed to 'didn't go' to match the past tense context. Also, 'go library' should be 'go to the library' with the correct preposition and article.

× No, don't tell Chinese kids my library.

✓ No, Chinese kids don't often go to the library.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It seems the intended meaning is that Chinese kids don't often go to the library. The pronoun usage and sentence structure have been corrected to convey this meaning clearly.