Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using correct articles and plural forms, and by expanding your response slightly to sound more natural and complete. For example, say "I seldom go to the library because I prefer digital books." Also, adding a reason or example would make your answer more effective.

例: I seldom go to the library because I prefer reading digital books on my tablet, which is more convenient for me.

提案: Your answer has good content but needs clearer sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, and correct prepositions and verb forms. For example, say "I usually find a place with a charger nearby so I can plug in my computer, and then I look for books that really interest me."

例: I usually find a seat near a charger to plug in my laptop, and then I browse for books that really interest me, such as novels or history books.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy and improve coherence by using linking words. For example, "No, I didn't go to the library very often when I was a kid. Instead, I usually went to bookstores to find comics or novels rather than academic books. Moreover, I preferred spending my time outdoors rather than in the library."

例: No, I didn't go to the library often as a child. Instead, I usually visited bookstores to find comics or novels, and I preferred spending my time outdoors rather than inside the library.

提案: Your answer is relevant but needs clearer expression and grammar. Use plural forms and correct verb tenses, and clarify your points with linking words. For example, "I would say it depends. Some strict families may encourage their children to go to the library for studying, but in my family, we were allowed to choose our own activities."

例: I think it depends. Some strict families encourage their children to visit the library regularly for studying, but in my family, I was free to choose how I spent my time.

× I seldom go to library because I prefer digital book.

✓ I seldom go to the library because I prefer digital books.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'digital book' should be plural 'digital books' to match the general preference for multiple items.

× I usually find a place where it has the charger beside so I can plug my computer on and then I will go to find books that I really interested in.

✓ I usually find a place where there is a charger beside so I can plug in my computer, and then I will go to find books that I am really interested in.

The phrase 'where it has the charger beside' is incorrect; 'where there is a charger beside' is correct to indicate existence. 'Plug my computer on' should be 'plug in my computer' as 'plug in' is the correct phrasal verb. Also, 'books that I really interested in' lacks the verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am really interested in'.

× No, I didn't go to the library very often when I was a kid. I usually go to a bookstore, but the books that I usually find is some comics or novel, not academic book. And I don't spending my time in the library, I rather spend my time outdoors.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library very often when I was a kid. I usually went to a bookstore, but the books that I usually found were some comics or novels, not academic books. And I didn't spend my time in the library; I rather spent my time outdoors.

Since the context is past ('when I was a kid'), verbs should be in past tense: 'go' to 'went', 'find' to 'found', 'is' to 'were', 'don't spending' to 'didn't spend', and 'spend' to 'spent'. Also, 'novel' and 'academic book' should be plural to match 'some comics' and general meaning.

× My family let me choose my own account.

✓ My family let me choose my own path.

The phrase 'choose my own account' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. 'Account' is not the appropriate noun here; 'path' or 'way' better expresses the idea of making one's own choices.