Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to use a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, and avoid awkward phrasing like 'I'm not mostly visit library.' Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading online articles rather than books.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct verb tenses. Also, try to provide more specific details about the kind of information you look for.

例: I usually visit the library to find reliable information for my studies, especially books related to history or science.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and redundancy. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating phrases. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

例: Yes, when I was in school, I used to go to the library once a week to find books for my assignments.

提案: Your answer does not address the question. Even if you are not Chinese, try to answer based on your knowledge or say you are not sure. Avoid giving irrelevant answers.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in India, many children visit libraries regularly to study and read.

× No, actually I'm not the type of person who likes reading books, so I'm not mostly visit library.

✓ No, actually I'm not the type of person who likes reading books, so I don't mostly visit the library.

The phrase 'I'm not mostly visit library' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'I don't mostly visit the library' to express frequency properly. Also, 'the library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× No, actually I'm not the type of person who likes reading books, so I'm not mostly visit library.

✓ No, actually I'm not the type of person who likes reading books, so I don't mostly visit the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I most probably visit library to get some information whenever I need it.

✓ I most probably visit the library to get some information whenever I need it.

The noun 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Omitting 'the' is incorrect here.

× So whenever I visit library I only look for the books which I needed to get reliable information.

✓ So whenever I visit the library, I only look for the books which I need to get reliable information.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'needed' should be 'need' to maintain present tense consistency.

× So whenever I visit library I only look for the books which I needed to get reliable information.

✓ So whenever I visit the library, I only look for the books which I need to get reliable information.

The verb 'needed' is in past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'need' because it describes a habitual action.

× Yeah, mostly when I was in my school, I prefer going to library once a week as I have assignments.

✓ Yeah, mostly when I was in school, I preferred going to the library once a week as I had assignments.

The sentence refers to past habits, so 'prefer' should be 'preferred' and 'have' should be 'had' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'in my school' is better as 'in school' and 'library' needs 'the'.

× Yeah, mostly when I was in my school, I prefer going to library once a week as I have assignments.

✓ Yeah, mostly when I was in school, I preferred going to the library once a week as I had assignments.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'in my school' is less natural than 'in school' in this context.

× I and I also needed some books from library so I visited it frequently.

✓ I also needed some books from the library, so I visited it frequently.

The phrase 'I and I' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'I also'. Additionally, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' and a comma is needed before 'so' as it connects two independent clauses.

× I and I also needed some books from library so I visited it frequently.

✓ I also needed some books from the library, so I visited it frequently.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.