Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: I don't go to the library very often. Usually, I visit it only before exams or when I need to write an essay. Sometimes, I also meet my classmates there to study together.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward phrasing. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add details. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and concise.

例: In the library, I usually find a quiet spot to sit and take out my laptop. Then, I start researching for my assignments. Sometimes, I go upstairs to find useful books and other resources.

提案: Your answer is generally relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar and linking ideas more smoothly. Use linking words to connect your sentences and provide more specific details.

例: Yes, I went to the library often when I was in fifth or sixth grade. During summer holidays, my busy parents sent me there. I spent most of my time reading books and attending classes that interested me.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear, direct response with specific details, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library. When I was a child, lots of kids my age attended interesting classes there and completed their summer holiday homework.

× Not very often I go to library only before my last examination and when I write my essay I went to library or meet my classmates.

✓ Not very often. I go to the library only before my last examination, and when I write my essay, I go to the library or meet my classmates.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation and conjunctions, causing confusion. Separating into clearer sentences and adding missing articles improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Not very often I go to library only before my last examination and when I write my essay I went to library or meet my classmates.

✓ Not very often. I go to the library only before my last examination, and when I write my essay, I go to the library or meet my classmates.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Not very often I go to library only before my last examination and when I write my essay I went to library or meet my classmates.

✓ Not very often. I go to the library only before my last examination, and when I write my essay, I go to the library or meet my classmates.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past tense 'went' incorrectly. Consistency in tense is necessary; since the question is about habitual actions, present tense 'go' is appropriate.

× As I say, I usually find a quiet space to sit there and take out of my laptop from my bag and start for some start and do some research and sometimes I go upstairs find some good resources.

✓ As I said, I usually find a quiet space to sit, take my laptop out of my bag, start working, do some research, and sometimes I go upstairs to find some good resources.

The original sentence is confusing and contains awkward phrasing and missing prepositions. Correcting verb forms, adding missing prepositions, and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× take out of my laptop from my bag

✓ take my laptop out of my bag

The phrase 'take out of my laptop from my bag' incorrectly orders prepositions. The correct order is 'take my laptop out of my bag'.

× sometimes I go upstairs find some good resources

✓ sometimes I go upstairs to find some good resources

The verb 'go' followed by another verb requires the preposition 'to' before the second verb to indicate purpose.

× I went to the library very often when I was fifth or sixth.

✓ I went to the library very often when I was in fifth or sixth grade.

The phrase 'when I was fifth or sixth' is incomplete; it should specify 'in fifth or sixth grade' to clarify the time period.

× My parents, they were so busy, so they sent me there.

✓ My parents were so busy, so they sent me there.

Using both 'My parents' and 'they' together is redundant. Removing 'they' avoids repetition.

× I spent most of time reading books

✓ I spent most of the time reading books

The phrase 'most of time' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'time'.

× I joined some classes for my interests.

✓ I joined some classes for my interests.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× there's many kids the same age as me.

✓ there are many kids the same age as me.

'There is' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'many kids'. The correct form is 'there are'.

× They started interesting classes there and doing their summer holiday homework when one.

✓ They started interesting classes there and did their summer holiday homework when young.

The verb 'started' should be followed by a noun or gerund; 'doing' is incorrectly used here. Also, 'when one' is unclear; 'when young' is more appropriate to indicate the time.