Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is very short and lacks detail. Try to provide a complete sentence with reasons or additional information to make your response more natural and effective. For example, explain why you don't go often or what you do instead.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually prefer reading books online or studying at home where it's more comfortable.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and avoid redundancy. Provide specific activities you do in the library.

例: In the library, I usually read books and sometimes meet friends to study together, but I don't talk much because I want to focus on my work.

提案: Your answer does not address the question directly and is confusing. Make sure to answer the question clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid asking for help in your answer.

例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. I enjoyed reading storybooks there, which helped me improve my English skills.

提案: Avoid refusing to answer questions. Try to give a polite and relevant response, even if you are unsure. Provide your opinion or general information about the topic.

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library to study and borrow books, especially during weekends and holidays.

× I need the library, I usually read the books meeting friends and I don't know, I don't speak much.

✓ I need the library, I usually read books, meet friends, and I don't know, I don't speak much.

The phrase 'meeting friends' is incorrectly used as a noun phrase here. It should be the base verb 'meet' to correctly list activities. Using the '-ing' form in this context is incorrect because it does not function as a gerund or participle modifying a noun but as part of a list of actions.

× Also now I am a kid and I want to learn English effective and very good.

✓ I am still a kid now and I want to learn English effectively and very well.

The adjective 'effective' and 'very good' are incorrectly used to describe the verb 'learn'. Instead, the adverbs 'effectively' and 'very well' should be used to modify the verb. Also, the phrase 'Also now I am a kid' is awkward; 'I am still a kid now' is clearer and grammatically correct.