List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は意図が伝わるが、文法と語彙の選択に不自然さがあります。具体的には “avoid getting items” は誤用で、不足している冠詞や動詞の形（例えば”helps me save time and money” の前の接続）を直すと自然になります。また、Supporting detail を1〜2文で補い、接続詞（because, so, therefore など）を使って論理を明確にしてください。文の数は5文以内に収めましょう。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves time and money. For example, by checking my list before I shop, I can stick to what I need and resist impulse purchases.

提案: 内容は分かるが、文法と語彙エラーが目立ち、最後の例文（"I always go puncture"）は意味不明です。名詞の複数形誤用（"works"→"work"）や冠詞、省略された接続も修正が必要です。Supporting detail は具体的で論理的に述べ、最後に実例を分かりやすい表現で示してください。接続詞（because, so, for example）でつなぎ、最大5文に抑えてください。

例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of tasks and prevents me from forgetting appointments. For example, when I write down deadlines and meetings, I can prioritize my day and complete tasks on time.

提案: 回答は明確で論理的ですが、語彙の繰り返し（"they think" の反復）を避け、より自然な表現にすると良いです。理由をもう一つ付け加え、接続詞（for example, furthermore）でつなぐと説得力が増します。文は簡潔に保ち、具体例を加えるとさらに良いです。

例: Some people find making lists unnecessary because they feel it takes too much time and prefer to start tasks immediately. For example, they may believe they work better under pressure and rely on memory rather than planning.

提案: 答えは分かりやすいですが、理由がやや重複しており、具体性が足りません。どの点で紙が便利か（視覚的に見やすい、書き込みやすいなど）を具体的に述べ、接続詞で整えると良いです。1〜2のサポート文で詳細を示してください。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to see everything at once and to tick off items by hand. This physical action helps me remember tasks better and keeps me focused while shopping.

× Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me avoid getting items and save time and money.

✓ Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me avoid forgetting items and save time and money.

The student used 'avoid getting items' which is incorrect in meaning and collocation. The intended meaning is to avoid forgetting items. Change 'getting' to 'forgetting' to express the correct idea. Note: this is primarily a lexical/collocation correction but also affects verb choice; ensure verbs match intended meaning.

× Yes, I often make a list for my works because it is useful for me and it helps me avoid forgetting appointments.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work because it is useful for me and it helps me avoid forgetting appointments.

The noun 'work' is uncountable when referring to a person's job or tasks in general. 'Works' is plural and usually refers to artworks or published works. Use the uncountable singular 'work' here.

× For example, when I make a list, I always go puncture.

✓ For example, when I make a list, I always check things off.

The phrase 'go puncture' is not grammatical English. The student likely meant 'tick off' or 'check off' items on a list. Replace with a correct phrasal verb such as 'check things off' to convey the intended action. This fixes both the incorrect verb choice and sentence structure.

× Some people think it is useless for them because they think making them is time consuming.

✓ Some people think it is useless for them because they think making lists is time-consuming.

The pronoun 'them' is unclear and mismatched; it should refer to 'lists'. Use the noun 'lists' for clarity. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated when used as a compound adjective before a noun: 'time-consuming.'

× They prefer to deal with tasks instead of spending time planning.

✓ They prefer to deal with tasks instead of spending time planning them.

The verb 'planning' needs an object here to be clear. Add 'them' to indicate that 'they' prefer dealing with tasks rather than planning the tasks. This corrects the omitted object and clarifies meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it helps me avoid forgetting things, so it is convenient for me.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because it helps me avoid forgetting things, so it's more convenient for me.

Use plural 'lists' to match the habitual preference in general. Also 'it is convenient for me' is acceptable but 'it's more convenient for me' sounds more natural in contrastive context. This keeps present-tense habitual meaning.