List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then adding specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and saves time. For example, it guides me to the right departments quickly, making the shopping process more efficient.

提案: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid vague expressions and improve vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely.

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for work because it helps me prioritize tasks. For instance, I can focus on the most important jobs first, which increases my productivity throughout the day.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting reasons using linking words. Use correct grammar and avoid repeating the same idea multiple times.

例: Some people avoid making lists because they believe it wastes time and prefer to rely on their memory. However, this can sometimes lead to forgetting important tasks or items.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words. Also, improve sentence structure for better clarity.

例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing them down helps me remember better. For example, I usually prepare my shopping list a week in advance on paper to ensure I don't forget anything.

× Yes, I do make a list when I used to shop or when I used to go to a grocery shop, I make a list of certain things which I need to approach purchase it from there.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I shop or when I go to a grocery shop; I make a list of certain things which I need to purchase from there.

The phrase 'used to' is used for past habits, but the question is about current habits. Therefore, 'used to' should be replaced with the simple present tense 'shop' and 'go' to correctly express habitual actions in the present.

× I make a list of certain things which I need to approach purchase it from there.

✓ I make a list of certain things which I need to purchase from there.

The phrase 'approach purchase it' is incorrect. The verb 'purchase' does not require 'approach' before it. Removing 'approach' corrects the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× It makes the thing convenient and quick and the help me what I need and which department of the store I need to visit.

✓ It makes things convenient and quick and helps me know what I need and which department of the store I need to visit.

The phrase 'the help me what I need' is incorrect. It should be 'helps me know what I need' to correctly use the verb 'help' followed by an object and an infinitive verb. Also, 'the thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.

× It makes the thing convenient and quick and the help me what I need and which department of the store I need to visit.

✓ It makes things convenient and quick and helps me know what I need and which department of the store I need to visit.

The phrase 'the thing' is incorrect here because it refers to multiple items or tasks. The plural form 'things' is appropriate to indicate multiple items, making the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I always make a work list whenever I go to my work.

✓ Yes, I always make a work list whenever I go to work.

The phrase 'go to my work' is less common and sounds awkward. The correct expression is 'go to work' without 'my' to indicate going to one's place of employment.

× It helps me stay organized and inshore.

✓ It helps me stay organized and ensure.

The word 'inshore' is incorrect here. The intended word is likely 'ensure', meaning to make certain. This correction fixes the incorrect word usage.

× What type of work do I need to do? Which is of more important than which is of less importance?

✓ What type of work do I need to do? Which is more important and which is less important?

The phrase 'which is of more important than which is of less importance' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'which is more important and which is less important' to correctly compare importance.

× Also, making a list for the work I have to do in my day-to-day life knows exactly what I have to do.

✓ Also, making a list for the work I have to do in my day-to-day life helps me know exactly what I have to do.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'knows' with 'making a list' as the subject. The corrected sentence uses 'helps me know' to properly express that making a list assists the speaker in knowing their tasks.

× People usually not make lists whenever they're going for a shopping or for any work because they think it's time consuming.

✓ People usually do not make lists whenever they're going shopping or for any work because they think it's time-consuming.

The phrase 'usually not make' is incorrect; it should be 'usually do not make' to form the negative in present simple tense. Also, 'going for a shopping' should be 'going shopping'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× They think it's of less important they think their brain are far active than that of making a list.

✓ They think it's less important; they think their brains are more active than when making a list.

The phrase 'of less important' is incorrect; it should be 'less important'. 'Their brain are' is incorrect; it should be 'their brains are' to agree in number. 'Far active' is awkward; 'more active' is appropriate. The phrase 'than that of making a list' is unclear and corrected to 'than when making a list'.

× They think it's a time consuming task, so they usually not prefer making a list so that.

✓ They think it's a time-consuming task, so they usually do not prefer making a list.

The phrase 'usually not prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'usually do not prefer' to form the negative in present simple tense. The ending 'so that' is incomplete and unnecessary here, so it is removed.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my paper instead of that of phone because when I I make list a week prior to my shopping day so that I can write all the things which I need.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on paper instead of on my phone because I make the list a week prior to my shopping day so that I can write all the things I need.

The phrase 'on my paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. 'Instead of that of phone' is awkward; it should be 'instead of on my phone'. The repeated 'I' is a typo and removed. 'Make list' should be 'make the list'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.