List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to make your response more concise and natural by directly answering the question first, then providing a clear reason with linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times.

例: Usually, I don't make a shopping list because I'm often in a hurry. However, I realize it's necessary since it helps me stay organized and saves time.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, especially the last sentence. Make sure to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid grammatical errors and be specific about how the list helps you.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and stay organized. Having everything written down makes it easier to manage my daily responsibilities effectively.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas in complete sentences and explain reasons clearly. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid vague phrases.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to shop spontaneously. They feel restricted by lists and like to decide what to buy on the spot.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words and complete sentences to explain why you prefer your phone for lists.

例: I prefer to make my shopping list on my phone because I check it frequently throughout the day. Also, I can set reminders that notify me when I need to buy something.

× Actually I don't get enough time to make a list of shopping.

✓ Actually I don't have enough time to make a shopping list.

The phrase 'don't get enough time' is awkward and less common in this context. The correct expression is 'don't have enough time' to indicate lack of time. Also, 'make a list of shopping' is better expressed as 'make a shopping list' for natural English usage.

× I always remained in a hurry.

✓ I am always in a hurry.

The sentence uses past tense 'remained' incorrectly when referring to a habitual present state. The present tense 'am' is appropriate to express a current and ongoing condition.

× That's why I don't have enough time to make a list of it.

✓ That's why I don't have enough time to make a list of it.

No correction needed here as the preposition usage is acceptable. 'Make a list of it' is understandable, though 'make a list for it' might be more natural. However, since it fits the context, no change is necessary.

× But I prefer and I support to make it.

✓ But I prefer and support making it.

The verb 'support' should be followed by a gerund ('making') rather than an infinitive ('to make'). Also, 'prefer' can be followed by a gerund or infinitive, but for parallel structure, using gerunds for both verbs is better.

× Yes I do because it helps me a lot to prioritize my work and it's very helpful when something is in black and white.

✓ Yes, I do because it helps me a lot to prioritize my work and it's very helpful when something is in black and white.

A comma is needed after 'Yes' to separate the introductory word from the rest of the sentence for clarity.

× It helps me a lot to prepare your daily work.

✓ It helps me a lot to prepare my daily work.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own work, so 'my' should be used.

× At the same time, I'm a person who don't.

✓ At the same time, I'm a person who doesn't.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'person' which is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' to agree in number.

× It's because they prefer to shop. Or buy something by their own.

✓ It's because they prefer to shop or buy something on their own.

The sentence fragment 'Or buy something by their own.' is incomplete and incorrectly structured. It should be combined with the previous sentence and use the correct preposition 'on their own' instead of 'by their own'.

× They don't like to be in a stick to their guns and they prioritize their.

✓ They don't like to stick to their guns and they prioritize their preferences.

The phrase 'be in a stick to their guns' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'stick to their guns' without 'be in a'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'they prioritize their.' which is incomplete; adding 'preferences' or a similar noun completes the thought.

× I like to prepare my list on my phone because my phone is the only one I check every after 5 to 10 minutes and eight.

✓ I like to prepare my list on my phone because my phone is the only one I check every 5 to 10 minutes and at night.

The phrase 'every after 5 to 10 minutes and eight' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'every 5 to 10 minutes and at night' or similar. Also, 'and eight' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'and at night' or 'and evening'.

× I also can set reminder when too.

✓ I can also set reminders that notify me.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'I also can set reminder when too.' lacks clarity and correct structure. It should be rephrased to express the ability to set reminders that provide notifications.

× Give me a notification to.

✓ They give me a notification too.

The sentence fragment 'Give me a notification to.' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be rephrased to 'They give me a notification too.' to convey the intended meaning.