List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some language errors and redundancy. Try to use correct vocabulary ('shop' instead of 'show') and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to ensure I buy everything I need and avoid forgetting anything.

提案: Your answer has good content but the sentence structure is unclear and some phrases are confusing. Use clearer sentences and linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because my schedule changes daily. This helps me remember important tasks and saves me a lot of time.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured to complete all tasks. However, if they understand that lists help manage time better, they might change their opinion.

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but can be more concise and natural. Avoid unnecessary phrases and improve sentence flow with linking words.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, making it easier to access and update my tasks anytime.

× I usually make a list when I show because I want to know what I need to buy, what I need actually.

✓ I usually make a list when I shop because I want to know what I need to buy, what I actually need.

The word 'show' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'shop' to match the intended meaning. This is a vocabulary error affecting the present tense usage.

× If I don't make a list while I'm at work, I may forget things and making a list remember like I need to remember something, make it at least save me a lot of time.

✓ If I don't make a list while I'm at work, I may forget things, and making a list helps me remember what I need to do; it at least saves me a lot of time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'making a list remember' which is ungrammatical. The phrase should be restructured to use 'making a list helps me remember' to correctly use the verb + -ing form and clarify meaning.

× Because some people when they make when they made the list, they could feel under pressure of completing that list.

✓ Because some people, when they make or when they have made the list, they could feel under pressure to complete that list.

The sentence mixes present and past tense improperly. 'When they made' should be 'when they have made' to correctly express the past action with present relevance. Also, 'feel under pressure of completing' should be 'feel under pressure to complete' for correct verb usage.

× But if they realize making at least make them more comfort table and making their time more efficient, I think they will think making a list.

✓ But if they realize that making a list at least makes them more comfortable and makes their time more efficient, I think they will consider making a list.

The word 'comfort table' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable' (an adjective). Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity and proper adjective use.

× Actually, in the past, everyone was doing a list on the paper, but now we always live without phones.

✓ Actually, in the past, everyone used to make lists on paper, but now we always live with phones.

The phrase 'doing a list on the paper' is incorrect; 'make lists on paper' is the correct collocation. Also, 'live without phones' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'live with phones'.

× Phones are so important for us.

✓ Phones are so important to us.

The correct preposition to express importance to someone is 'to' rather than 'for' in this context.