List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct articles ('a list'), singular/plural agreement ('helps me'), and avoid redundancy. Also, try to provide a bit more detail to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting important items.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'the timer I do my work schedule'. To improve, clarify your meaning, use correct grammar, and add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks and manage my schedule more effectively.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid repeating 'so' unnecessarily and use articles properly ('a list'). Adding a linking word at the start would improve coherence.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily without writing them down.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar ('make a list on my phone') and avoiding repetition of 'so'. Also, adding more specific reasons would make your answer stronger.

例: In today's technological world, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily check it whenever I'm out shopping.

× Yes, I prefer to make list when I go for shopping as it help please to remember the things.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go shopping as it helps me to remember things.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'help please' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The article 'the' before 'things' is unnecessary because 'things' is general here.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list and it also works as it helps me to remember my work and the timer I do my work schedule.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list and it also works as it helps me to remember my work and the time I do my work schedule.

The word 'timer' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'time'. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.

× As some people have a good memory so they remember the things, so they avoid making list.

✓ As some people have a good memory, they remember things, so they avoid making lists.

The phrase 'making list' should be 'making lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is needed here. The article 'the' before 'things' is unnecessary because 'things' is general. Also, the sentence is better with a comma after 'memory' and removing the redundant 'so'.

× In this technological world, I prefer to make list in my phone so it helps me whenever I'm out so I can buy things.

✓ In this technological world, I prefer to make lists on my phone as it helps me whenever I'm out so I can buy things.

The phrase 'make list' should be 'make lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is appropriate here. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone. Also, 'so' is better replaced with 'as' to indicate reason.