List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct phrases like "makes my life much more easier" to "makes my life much easier."

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget items easily. Therefore, having a list helps me stay organized and makes shopping more efficient.

提案: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Avoid fragmented sentences and ensure subject-verb agreement.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for the whole month because it helps me stay productive and focused, ensuring I don't forget important tasks.

提案: Focus on clarity and avoid awkward phrases like "time of ways to waste age of time." Use linking words such as "because" to explain reasons clearly and keep sentences concise.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time and prefer to work more spontaneously.

提案: Avoid filler words like "you know" and informal phrases like "like 'cause." Use correct comparative forms such as "much easier" and provide a clear reason with linking words.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is much easier and convenient since I always carry my phone with me, so I don't need to bring a paper list.

× Yes, I do make list when I go shopping 'cause due to my lack of memory I do sometimes forget many things when I'm in the shop or I'm in the grocery store.

✓ Yes, I do make lists when I go shopping 'cause due to my lack of memory I do sometimes forget many things when I'm in the shop or I'm in the grocery store.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the context implies making more than one list over time. Using the singular form here is incorrect as it does not agree with the general statement about making lists when shopping.

× So making a list makes my life much more easier and it makes me feel like I'm more being productive so it's a better for me.

✓ So making a list makes my life much easier and it makes me feel like I'm more productive so it's better for me.

The phrase 'much more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective and should not be preceded by 'more'. Also, 'more being productive' is incorrect; it should be 'more productive'. The article 'a' before 'better' is unnecessary here.

× Oh yes, I do actually make a list of my work sometimes.

✓ Oh yes, I do actually make lists of my work sometimes.

The phrase 'a list of my work' suggests a single list, but the context implies multiple lists over time. Using the plural 'lists' is more appropriate to express this habitual action.

× I mean I make A to do list for whole month and that keeps me.

✓ I mean I make a to-do list for the whole month and that keeps me.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with hyphens. Also, 'for whole month' requires the definite article 'the' before 'whole month' to be grammatically correct.

× Productive and that helps me to focus on my work can not to skip from my mind.

✓ Productive and that helps me to focus on my work and not to forget it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Can not to skip from my mind' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning by using 'and not to forget it' to express the intended idea.

× So it's really helpful for me.

✓ So it's really helpful to me.

While 'helpful for me' is commonly used, 'helpful to me' is more standard in formal English. Both are acceptable, but 'helpful to me' is preferred for clarity.

× At first I would like to say that everyone has their own opinion and on ways to do their own work.

✓ At first I would like to say that everyone has his or her own opinion and ways to do their own work.

Using 'their' as a singular pronoun is common but can be considered informal. For formal correctness, 'his or her' should be used when referring to 'everyone'. Also, 'and on ways' is incorrect; it should be 'and ways'.

× So I would say that yes, some people don't like to make to do lists 'cause they think that it's just a time of ways to waste age of time and that's clearly unnecessary.

✓ So I would say that yes, some people don't like to make to-do lists 'cause they think that it's just a way to waste time and that's clearly unnecessary.

The phrase 'a time of ways to waste age of time' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'a way to waste time' to correctly express the idea.

× Making a list on your phone is much more easier and you know, like 'cause we take our phone everywhere with us so we don't really have to carry the mini checklist.

✓ Making a list on your phone is much easier and you know, like 'cause we take our phone everywhere with us so we don't really have to carry a mini checklist.

'Much more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already comparative; 'much easier' is correct. Also, 'the mini checklist' should be 'a mini checklist' because it is not a specific known checklist.