List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and within five sentences.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I like to stay organized. Preparing a list beforehand helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store. It also makes the shopping process more manageable and efficient.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and confusing phrases. Focus on directly answering the question with clear and simple sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I don't usually make lists for my work, but I try to organize my tasks to be time-efficient. However, I do prepare a list the day before to plan what I need to accomplish. This helps me complete all my tasks on time.

提案: Your answer has some good ideas but is repetitive and incomplete. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and avoid repeating the same points. Also, finish your sentences fully to make your answer complete.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can manage tasks without planning. Additionally, they might find making lists time-consuming or unnecessary. However, I prefer to plan ahead because it helps me stay organized and focused.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use more natural expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone using the Apple Notes app because it's quick and convenient. Since I always have my phone with me, I can easily add items whenever I think of them, which is more practical than using pen and paper.

× I'm a well organized person so I like to make them less prior to when I go to shopping and prior to other tasks too.

✓ I'm a well-organized person, so I like to make lists prior to when I go shopping and prior to other tasks too.

The phrase 'make them less' is incorrect; it seems the student intended to say 'make lists'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The correction clarifies the quantifier and corrects the verb phrase.

× I like to make them less prior to when I go to shopping and prior to other tasks too.

✓ I like to make lists before I go shopping and before other tasks too.

The preposition 'prior to' is formal and can be replaced with 'before' for clarity and naturalness. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'to'.

× Well, I don't make list for my work.

✓ Well, I don't make lists for my work.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple items or tasks. Using the plural form is appropriate here.

× I tried to organize the folks in a certain way so that it's that it's time efficient and I am able to do all the tasks in a specific period of time.

✓ I try to organize the tasks in a certain way so that it's time-efficient and I am able to complete all the tasks within a specific period of time.

The sentence has redundancy ('it's that it's') and unclear reference ('folks' likely meant 'tasks'). Also, 'tried' should be present tense 'try' to match the context. The correction improves clarity and tense consistency.

× On the top of that, I just make list prior to the prior to the day prior to the next state.

✓ On top of that, I just make a list the day before the next day.

The phrase is confusing and contains repetition ('prior to the prior to'). 'On the top of that' should be 'On top of that'. Also, 'prior to the next state' is unclear; likely intended 'the next day'. The correction simplifies and clarifies the meaning.

× Furthermore, all the tasks assigned dismal list RB completed on.

✓ Furthermore, all the tasks assigned on the list are completed.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical words ('dismal list RB'). The correction restructures the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× people usually think that they can manage the thing without making list.

✓ People usually think that they can manage things without making a list.

'The thing' should be plural 'things' to generalize, and 'making list' should be 'making a list' to be grammatically correct.

× Moreover, they are too lazy for early.

✓ Moreover, they are too lazy to start early.

The phrase 'too lazy for early' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'too lazy to start early' or 'too lazy to begin early'.

× They're too lazy to make the list.

✓ They're too lazy to make a list.

'The list' implies a specific list known to both speaker and listener, but here it is general, so 'a list' is appropriate.

× I think they don't plan the things prior to the time and they think that they can manage it by their own at a specific point of time.

✓ I think they don't plan things ahead of time and they think that they can manage it on their own at a specific point in time.

'Prior to the time' is better expressed as 'ahead of time'. 'By their own' should be 'on their own'. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things'.

× I think they don't plan the things prior to the time and they think that they can manage it by their own at a specific point of time.

✓ I think they don't plan things ahead of time and they think that they can manage it on their own at a specific point in time.

The pronoun phrase 'by their own' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on their own'.

× But this approach is not preferred by me because.

✓ But this approach is not preferred by me because it is ineffective.

The sentence is incomplete; it ends with 'because' but does not provide a reason. The correction completes the sentence logically.

× I usually prefer to make the list on my phone.

✓ I usually prefer to make lists on my phone.

'The list' implies a specific list, but the context suggests general preference, so 'lists' plural is more appropriate.

× I used the Apple nodes where I quickly write down everything down when it comes to my mind.

✓ I use the Apple Notes app where I quickly write down everything that comes to my mind.

'Used' should be present tense 'use' to match context. 'Apple nodes' is incorrect; correct term is 'Apple Notes'. Also, 'write down everything down' is redundant; 'write down everything' suffices.

× I think it's more accessible and convenient for me because phone is the phone is the device that I already have with me rather than doing it on a pen and paper.

✓ I think it's more accessible and convenient for me because the phone is a device that I always have with me rather than using pen and paper.

The sentence has repetition ('phone is the phone is'). 'Doing it on a pen and paper' is incorrect; better to say 'using pen and paper'. Also, 'the phone' needs the definite article.

× I feel it's more useful on the phone because the phone I always have it.

✓ I feel it's more useful on the phone because I always have it with me.

The phrase 'the phone I always have it' is incorrect; 'it' is redundant. The correct form is 'I always have it with me'.