List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your sentences concise. For example, instead of repeating 'list' and 'checklist', you can say 'I first check my pantry to see what I need, then I make a list on my phone to avoid forgetting anything.'

例: Yes, I usually check my pantry first to see what items are running low, then I make a list on my phone so I don't forget anything when I go shopping.

提案: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer clearer and more coherent. Avoid short fragmented sentences and try to combine ideas smoothly. For example, you can say 'Yes, I create a checklist to prioritize important tasks, and I review it at the end of the day to make sure I haven't forgotten anything.'

例: Yes, I create a checklist to prioritize the most important tasks, and I review it at the end of the day to ensure everything is done.

提案: Try to connect your ideas better and avoid abrupt sentence breaks. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to explain reasons clearly. Also, avoid grammar mistakes such as 'a most effective way' which should be 'the most effective way'.

例: Well, some people don't like making lists because they find it tedious and time-consuming; however, I think it's the most effective way to stay organized and avoid forgetting things.

提案: Work on fluency and grammar by avoiding sentence fragments and correcting word order. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I don't have to worry about forgetting paper.'

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and handy, so I don't have to worry about forgetting a paper list.

× Yes, I do have a list when I shop, so I first I create a list, a checklist in my pantry, which are the things that are lacking and then I bring my phone to make sure that I. Don't forget anything.

✓ Yes, I do have a list when I shop, so first I create a list, a checklist in my pantry, which includes the things that are lacking, and then I bring my phone to make sure that I don't forget anything.

The original sentence has an unnecessary repetition of 'I' and a fragmented sentence with 'I. Don't forget anything.' Also, 'which are the things that are lacking' is better expressed as 'which includes the things that are lacking' to correctly describe the checklist contents. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes, I created. Checklist. And to start prioritizing which one are most important. So I will not forget anything and then I review it at the end of the day to ensure I don't forget anything.

✓ Yes, I created a checklist to start prioritizing which ones are most important, so I will not forget anything, and then I review it at the end of the day to ensure I don't forget anything.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete, such as 'Yes, I created. Checklist.' and 'And to start prioritizing which one are most important.' The correction combines these fragments into a complete, coherent sentence with proper subject-verb agreement ('which ones are most important').

× Well, some people find it tedious. And time consuming for me. Creating a list is a most effective way to make sure I don't forget anything and to keep things organized.

✓ Well, some people find it tedious and time-consuming. For me, creating a list is the most effective way to make sure I don't forget anything and to keep things organized.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'a most effective way' instead of 'the most effective way' because it refers to a specific superlative. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. The correction fixes these issues and improves sentence flow.

× I create a list through my phone. It is. I found it most effective becauses. It is comes handy and I don't. Sometimes I forget to bring my paper.

✓ I create a list on my phone. I find it most effective because it is handy, and sometimes I forget to bring my paper.

The phrase 'create a list through my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' for using a device. The sentence fragments and errors like 'It is comes handy' and 'becauses' are corrected to proper grammar and spelling. The correction also removes unnecessary pauses and improves clarity.