List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and keeps me organized.

提案: Your answer has good content but is difficult to understand due to grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use clear sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I make a list of tasks I need to complete each day. It works well because it saves me time and helps me plan my work in advance.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Avoid using informal or vague words like 'lethargic' without explanation. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically with complete sentences.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. However, making a list can help them stay organized and be more productive.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes and repetitive phrases. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I don't have to worry about losing a piece of paper.

× Yes, I always make a list like a checklist when I shall be 'cause it keeps me updated and I do not forgot to buy anything that is important.

✓ Yes, I always make a list like a checklist when I will be because it keeps me updated and I do not forget to buy anything that is important.

The phrase 'when I shall be' is incorrect for expressing future intention in this context; 'when I will be' is more appropriate. Also, 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence requires present tense 'forget' to match the ongoing action.

× Yes, I always make a list like a checklist when I shall be 'cause it keeps me updated and I do not forgot to buy anything that is important.

✓ Yes, I always make a list like a checklist when I will be because it keeps me updated and I do not forget to buy anything that is important.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget' to indicate habitual action.

× The task I have to complete in a particular day it yes it obviously worked for me because it saved my time so I don't have to organize my things at a time and I am always planned or time ahead.

✓ The tasks I have to complete in a particular day obviously work for me because they save my time, so I don't have to organize my things all at once and I am always planned ahead of time.

The original sentence has awkward structure and unclear subject-verb agreement. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'have to complete'. 'It yes it obviously worked' is redundant and incorrect; simplified to 'obviously work'. 'Saved' changed to 'save' to match present tense context. 'Organize my things at a time' corrected to 'all at once'. 'I am always planned or time ahead' corrected to 'I am always planned ahead of time' for clarity.

× I am always planned or time ahead.

✓ I am always planned ahead of time.

The phrase 'planned or time ahead' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'planned ahead of time' to indicate preparation in advance.

× I think they are just lethargic to make the list, but it is very helpful if they make the list.

✓ I think they are just too lethargic to make the list, but it is very helpful if they do.

The phrase 'lethargic to make' is awkward; adding 'too' clarifies meaning. Also, 'if they make the list' is repetitive; 'if they do' avoids repetition and is more natural.

× The reason is that people just know like to make a list before they are just being. Unproductive and. Yeah.

✓ The reason is that people do not like to make a list before they become unproductive.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'People just know like' is incorrect; corrected to 'people do not like'. 'Before they are just being unproductive' is awkward; corrected to 'before they become unproductive'. Removed unnecessary filler words for clarity.

× OK, so I prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause if I write it on the paper, I do have to carry the paper and it might get lossed and in the phone it won't be, I won't be able to carry something or it won't be lost, get lost or something.

✓ OK, so I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I write it on paper, I have to carry the paper and it might get lost, but on the phone, I won't have to carry anything and it won't get lost.

The phrase 'write it on the paper' is better as 'write it on paper' (no article). 'Get lossed' is incorrect; correct past participle is 'get lost'. The sentence structure is confusing; rephrased for clarity and correct preposition use. 'In the phone' changed to 'on the phone' as the correct preposition for devices.