List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response and explain your reason clearly using complete sentences. Avoid fragmented sentences and ensure your answer is natural and effective.

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously, especially when there are discounts available.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'stake organized' and 'important tax'. Use correct vocabulary and structure to make your answer clearer and more natural.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work to stay organized and to ensure I don't forget important tasks.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a direct reason and explain it with supporting details using linking words. Avoid fragmented sentences and irrelevant words.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to shop spontaneously and enjoy finding discounts without restrictions.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, you can add more specific reasons or examples using linking words to enrich your response.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to access anytime, plus I can easily edit or add items whenever I remember something.

× No, I didn't make a list when I saw.

✓ No, I didn't make a list when I shopped.

The verb 'saw' is incorrect in this context because the action refers to shopping, which is a past event. The correct past tense verb is 'shopped'. 'Saw' means to perceive with eyes, which does not fit the context.

× Because. I need to. So clearly an. They could discount.

✓ Because I need to, so clearly they could give a discount.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work and to stake organized and ensure I don't forget important tax.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work to stay organized and ensure I don't forget important tasks.

The word 'stake' is incorrect; the correct word is 'stay'. Also, 'tax' should be 'tasks' to fit the context. Quantifiers and word choice need correction for meaning and grammar.

× Some people. Don't like making list because they want to shop. Chili and they want to discount also.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they want to shop freely and they want discounts too.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity. 'Chili' is incorrect; likely intended 'freely'. Also, 'discount' should be plural 'discounts' to match the context.