List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating that you make a list when shopping and explain briefly why. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making a list helps you. Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me prioritize tasks and complete them on time, which increases my productivity.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to clearly explain reasons why some people dislike making lists, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and dislike following a strict schedule. Also, they might find lists restrictive or unnecessary.

提案: Your answer has good points but needs clearer grammar and linking words. Start with a clear preference, then explain reasons logically and avoid awkward phrasing.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and environmentally friendly. Also, my phone reminds me to complete my tasks on time.

× Actually, yes, I prefer to make a list. And then I want to go shop it depends on what I want to buy.

✓ Actually, yes, I prefer to make a list. Then I want to go shopping; it depends on what I want to buy.

The original sentence has a run-on structure and incorrect verb form 'go shop'. 'Go shopping' is the correct phrase. Also, the sentence needs proper punctuation to separate ideas clearly.

× For example, by now you want to go out shopping for grocery.

✓ For example, if you want to go out shopping for groceries now.

The phrase 'by now you want' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'if you want' to express a conditional situation. Also, 'grocery' should be plural 'groceries' as it refers to multiple items.

× I make at least help me to shop more organization and.

✓ Making a list helps me shop more organized.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence clearly states the intended meaning with proper structure and word choice.

× Yes, I tried to make a plan for my day and night before it helped me and arrange my task by important.

✓ Yes, I try to make a plan for my day and night before; it helps me arrange my tasks by importance.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'tried' and 'helped' when the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'try' and 'helps' are appropriate. Also, 'arrange my task by important' is corrected to 'arrange my tasks by importance' for grammatical correctness.

× It helped me to be more productive and do every task on time.

✓ It helps me to be more productive and to do every task on time.

The sentence should use present tense 'helps' to indicate a habitual effect. Also, adding 'to' before 'do' improves parallelism in the sentence.

× And also help me to be more productive.

✓ It also helps me to be more productive.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. Adding 'It' as the subject and changing 'help' to 'helps' corrects the sentence.

× It has a very use reason.

✓ It has a very useful reason.

The adjective 'use' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'useful' to describe 'reason'.

× Firstly, some people may prefer to do everything whenever they want they prefer and maybe they don't have a stable plan for the days.

✓ Firstly, some people may prefer to do everything whenever they want, and maybe they don't have a stable plan for the days.

The original sentence is a run-on without proper conjunction and punctuation. Adding a comma and 'and' separates the ideas clearly.

× Or add a preferred to.

✓ Or they prefer not to.

The original phrase is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence completes the thought logically.

× I prefer to make at least on my phone because it's more convenient for me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me.

The phrase 'make at least' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. This correction clarifies the meaning.

× It's avoid to waste of paper or a help to our environment.

✓ It helps avoid wasting paper and helps our environment.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and verb forms. 'Avoid to waste of paper' is incorrect; the correct form is 'avoid wasting paper'. Also, 'a help to our environment' is corrected to 'helps our environment' for clarity and correctness.

× Besides that it's my phone Remember Me to do my task on time.

✓ Besides that, my phone reminds me to do my tasks on time.

The original sentence has incorrect capitalization and word order. 'Remember Me' should be 'reminds me', and the sentence needs proper punctuation and plural form for 'tasks'.