List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Améliorez la clarté et la structure de votre réponse en évitant les répétitions et en utilisant des phrases complètes et cohérentes. Essayez de répondre directement à la question avec une phrase principale claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques. Par exemple, expliquez pourquoi vous préférez mémoriser la liste plutôt que de l'écrire.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list in my mind because I have a good memory. However, I don't write it down on paper. Also, I don't shop very often since my dad usually does it for me.

提案: Clarifiez votre réponse en structurant mieux vos phrases et en évitant les erreurs grammaticales. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus fluide et donnez des exemples précis de la façon dont la liste vous aide.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work, especially during exam periods. I prepare it a week in advance, which helps me organize my time and decide which subjects to revise. This method is very helpful and I would recommend it to others.

提案: Améliorez la cohérence et la précision de votre réponse en évitant les répétitions et en expliquant clairement les raisons pour lesquelles certaines personnes n'aiment pas faire des listes. Utilisez des connecteurs logiques pour structurer votre discours.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they fear they won't follow them. I used to feel the same way, but I realized that making lists actually increases my productivity.

提案: Clarifiez votre préférence en structurant votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire et des détails spécifiques. Évitez les erreurs grammaticales et utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus fluide.

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I tend to ignore them on my phone. Paper lists help me stay focused, while my phone often distracts me from following the list.

× Of course I may, I make a list when I when I got for shopping because but my list is why I put it in my mind because I remember things very well.

✓ Of course I do, I make a list when I go shopping because my list is why I put it in my mind since I remember things very well.

The modal verb 'may' is incorrectly used here; 'may' expresses possibility or permission, not habitual action. The correct auxiliary verb for habitual actions in present tense is 'do'. Also, 'got for shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' to indicate the action in present tense.

× But I don't write list like by my hand and I don't know, I don't go for shopping very much because my dad go too.

✓ But I don't write lists by hand and I don't go shopping very much because my dad goes too.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of making lists. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The verb 'go' referring to 'my dad' requires third person singular form 'goes'.

× Of course, I made a list for my work, especially in the exam period.

✓ Of course, I make a list for my work, especially during the exam period.

The question is about habitual action, so present tense 'make' is appropriate instead of past tense 'made'. Also, 'in the exam period' is better expressed as 'during the exam period'.

× I made a week before the exams and just it helps it very helpful and beneficial for my work.

✓ I make one a week before the exams and it is very helpful and beneficial for my work.

The phrase 'I made a week before the exams' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'I make one a week before the exams' to indicate making a list. Also, 'just it helps it very helpful' is redundant and incorrect; 'it is very helpful' is correct.

× It's helped me to the to order my time to these devices every time and which the subject I will revise.

✓ It helps me to organize my time and decide which subjects I will revise.

The pronouns and phrases are confusing and incorrect. 'It's helped me to the to order my time to these devices every time' is unclear. The correct expression is 'It helps me to organize my time' and 'decide which subjects I will revise'.

× I actually met some people that don't like to make lessons and I and I don't want to commit list because they fear they don't follow what list and I was one of them one time and I just got a fair myself.

✓ I actually met some people who don't like to make lists and don't want to commit to a list because they fear they won't follow it. I was one of them once and I just got a fear myself.

The modal verb 'don't want to commit list' is incorrect; it should be 'commit to a list'. Also, 'fear they don't follow what list' should be 'fear they won't follow it'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I I can't just make it obligatory to me to follow the list and the and that I make sure that they make my productivity more higher.

✓ I can't make it obligatory for me to follow the list, but I make sure that it increases my productivity.

The phrase 'make it obligatory to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for me'. Also, 'make my productivity more higher' is incorrect; 'more higher' is redundant, 'increases my productivity' is correct.

× I definitely going to choose to make less in my paper because if I go for my phone, I'm not gonna take it anymore.

✓ I will definitely choose to make lists on paper because if I use my phone, I won't take it with me anymore.

The phrase 'I definitely going to choose' is incorrect; it should be 'I will definitely choose' to express future intention. Also, 'make less in my paper' should be 'make lists on paper'. 'I'm not gonna take it anymore' is informal; 'I won't take it with me anymore' is clearer.

× But to put it in the paper, it's going to be more following and I'm going to follow it very I'm going to follow it in the time and because the phone is going to distract me from following the Watson list so that.

✓ But putting it on paper makes it easier to follow, and I will follow it on time because the phone distracts me from following the written list.

The preposition 'in the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. The phrase 'more following' is unclear; 'easier to follow' is better. 'Follow it in the time' should be 'follow it on time'. 'Watson list' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'written list' is appropriate.