List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答えは意味が伝わりにくく、文法や発音の誤りが多いです。もっと簡潔で正確な文を使い、5文以内で答えましょう。例えば、"Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and saves time."のように。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and saves time. I never go shopping without it.

提案: 答えが不完全で、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。質問に直接答え、理由や具体例を簡潔に述べましょう。例えば、"Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me focus and organize my tasks."のように。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me focus and organize my tasks. For example, I write down my daily goals to stay on track.

提案: 答えが不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、文を完成させましょう。例えば、"Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time and feels boring."のように。

例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time and feels boring. They prefer to remember things mentally.

提案: 答えが断片的で文法の誤りがあります。理由を明確にし、自然な英語で答えましょう。例えば、"I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me and I don't lose it."のように。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me and I don't lose it. It's also easy to edit and update my lists.

× Yes, I make her lace when I going to shopping because.

✓ Yes, I make her lace when I am going shopping because.

The verb 'going' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'I am going shopping'.

× Yes, I make her lace when I going to shopping because.

✓ Yes, I make my list when I am going shopping because.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect here; it should be 'my' to indicate possession of the list.

× It helps me remember that.

✓ It helps me remember what I need.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Remember that' is vague; it should specify 'what I need' to clarify the meaning.

× What I need an it's saving.

✓ what I need and it saves

The phrase 'What I need an it's saving' is grammatically incorrect. 'an' should be 'and', and 'it's saving' should be 'it saves' to match the present tense.

× Time so. Aye. Always bring it.

✓ time, so I always bring it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be combined into a coherent sentence with proper punctuation.

× Yes, I usually make a list from my works because it helps me.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate purpose.

× To concentrate to my work.

✓ to concentrate on my work.

The verb 'concentrate' is followed by the preposition 'on', not 'to'.

× N for example. OK.

✓ For example,

The phrase 'N for example. OK.' is unclear and fragmented. It should be 'For example,' to introduce an example properly.

× Some people may be sings.

✓ Some people may be busy.

The word 'sings' is incorrect in this context. Possibly a mishearing or typo; 'busy' fits the context better.

× It needs to. Much time.

✓ It needs too much time.

The phrase 'to. Much time' is incorrect. It should be 'too much time' to indicate an excessive amount.

× And.

The word 'And.' is a sentence fragment and should be removed or connected to another sentence.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because

The sentence is incomplete but grammatically correct up to this point.

× Phone as always. Yearly with me and.

✓ My phone is always with me, and

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be 'My phone is always with me, and' to be grammatically correct.

× Aye. I don't lost it.

✓ I don't lose it.

The verb 'lost' is past tense; after 'don't' we use the base form 'lose'.