List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but lacks fluency and natural phrasing. Try to combine your ideas into smoother sentences and avoid short, choppy phrases. Also, provide a bit more detail to enrich your answer.

例: I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I just think about what I need to buy before I go to the store.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure. Explain your habits and reasons more coherently.

例: I usually don't make a list for my work because I'm not very organized. I just keep in mind what I need to do and complete my tasks one by one.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

例: I think some people find making lists tiring because it requires a lot of thinking and planning, which can be stressful for them.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and explaining your preference in more detail.

例: I prefer to write my lists on paper because it helps me remember things better than using my phone.

× Not really. I just think. What do I have to buy? But I don't make a list for shopping.

✓ Not really. I just think about what I have to buy, but I don't make a list for shopping.

The original sentence has fragmented sentences and missing prepositions. 'I just think' is incomplete; it should be 'I just think about'. Also, combining the sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Not really. I usually don't make a list, but I'm working. Because I'm not that. Good person and I'm not that particular so I always just think about. What I have to do, and I just do it. It's my, it's my life.

✓ Not really. I usually don't make a list, but I am working. Because I'm not that good a person and I'm not that particular, so I always just think about what I have to do, and I just do it. It's my life.

The original contains sentence fragments and incorrect punctuation. 'I'm not that. Good person' should be 'I'm not that good a person'. Also, 'think about. What I have to do' should be combined into one sentence. Correct punctuation and sentence structure are necessary for clarity.

× I think it's really tired. And making a list is also tired and after. Like there have some. Thinking grab some thinking about sue I have to doing and I have to turn about the list that is really piles of people tired. There's a really.

✓ I think it's really tiring. Making a list is also tiring. Sometimes, thinking about what I have to do and going through the list makes people really tired.

The original uses 'tired' incorrectly; the correct adjective to describe something causing fatigue is 'tiring'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring and correcting verb forms improve comprehension.

× I think I prefer to write a note. On a paper. Because it's more remotable. For my memory.

✓ I think I prefer to write a note on paper because it's more memorable for my memory.

'On a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. 'Remotable' is incorrect; the correct word is 'memorable'. Also, 'for my memory' is acceptable but could be simplified to 'helps my memory' for clarity.