List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tente usar estruturas gramaticais corretas e vocabulário adequado para expressar suas ideias de forma clara e natural. Por exemplo, use o artigo definido 'a' antes de 'list' e o verbo no tempo correto.

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping, but I think I should.

提案: Melhore a clareza da resposta usando frases completas e vocabulário apropriado. Explique se você usa listas no trabalho e se elas são eficazes, usando conectores para ligar as ideias.

例: No, I don't usually make lists for my work, but when I do, they help me stay organized.

提案: Preste atenção à gramática e à coerência. Responda diretamente à pergunta e explique as razões com detalhes específicos, usando conectores para melhorar a fluidez.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember things mentally.

提案: Use expressões mais naturais e explique claramente sua preferência. Corrija erros gramaticais e use vocabulário adequado para justificar sua resposta.

例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it's easier to carry and I can quickly add or remove items.

× No, I don't make list when I go to shop, but I need.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I go shopping, but I need to.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the correct verb form. Adding 'to' after 'need' clarifies the sentence.

× No, I don't make list when I go to shop, but I need.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I go shopping, but I need to.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' which uses the gerund form as a noun indicating the activity.

× No, I don't use all make a list to my job.

✓ No, I don't always make a list for my job.

The word 'all' is incorrectly used; 'always' is the correct adverb to express frequency. Also, 'make a list to my job' should be 'make a list for my job' to use the correct preposition.

× No, I don't use all make a list to my job.

✓ No, I don't always make a list for my job.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'for' is the appropriate preposition to indicate purpose or benefit.

× I think people like make lists because make easy.

✓ I think people like to make lists because it makes things easy.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive 'to make' or gerund 'making'. Also, 'make easy' is incomplete; it should be 'makes things easy' to be grammatically correct.

× I think people like make lists because make easy.

✓ I think people like to make lists because it makes things easy.

The verb 'make' needs to agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'makes'. Also, the sentence needs the subject 'it' before 'makes'.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it's easy to take.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it's easy to carry.

The phrase 'easy to take' is awkward; 'easy to carry' is the correct expression when referring to something portable like a list on paper.