List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more organized. Avoid repeating phrases and try to use correct vocabulary, for example, use 'shopping' instead of 'show' and 'organized' instead of 'organizible'. Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it is a more convenient and organized way to shop. This helps me avoid looking for items unnecessarily in the store.

提案: Try to complete your sentences fully and use correct words, for example, 'word' should be 'work'. Also, use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas smoothly. Keep your answer clear and avoid incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I have work because it gives me a clear timetable. This helps me manage my time effectively and increases my productivity.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Use simple and correct sentences. Explain reasons clearly and avoid incomplete thoughts. For example, say 'some people find it easier to work without lists because they can organize their tasks mentally.'

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it easier to organize their work in their minds. They prefer not to write things down on paper.

提案: Try to speak in complete sentences and avoid pauses or filler words. Use correct vocabulary like 'notes app' and 'rather than paper'. Also, explain your preference clearly and logically.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone using the notes app because it is quick and convenient. I can easily check and update my list anytime, which is better than using paper.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list when I show becauses it's a more convenient, an organizable way to go shop to go shopping.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because it's a more convenient and organized way to go shopping.

The word 'show' is incorrect and should be 'shop' to match the context. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'An organizable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'organized'. Also, 'to go shop to go shopping' is redundant; 'to go shopping' suffices.

× Because when I go to store I don't have a look for everything unnecessarily.

✓ Because when I go to the store, I don't have to look for everything unnecessarily.

The phrase 'I don't have a look for' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't have to look for'. Also, 'to store' needs the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× I have a list which I have a list which.

✓ I have a list.

The sentence is repetitive and incomplete. Removing the repeated phrase makes it clear and grammatically correct.

× Yes, it's really helpful and I prefer to make list when I have to work 'cause it gives me a clear timetable.

✓ Yes, it's really helpful and I prefer to make a list when I have to work because it gives me a clear timetable.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formal correctness.

× Of how much time I have to spend on a single word so it's ready helpful to increase my productivity and it's really effective becauses it's make my.

✓ Of how much time I have to spend on a single work, so it's really helpful to increase my productivity and it's really effective because it makes my work better.

'Word' should be 'work' to fit the context. 'Ready helpful' is incorrect; it should be 'really helpful'. 'Becauses' is misspelled; correct is 'because'. 'It's make my' is incomplete and should be 'it makes my work better' to complete the thought.

× In my opinion, some people don't like making list 'cause they. They may be easy with going without layers.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they may be comfortable going without layers.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'They may be easy with going' is incorrect; 'easy' should be 'comfortable'. 'Layers' is unclear; possibly 'layers' is a mishearing or miswriting, but kept as is due to lack of context.

× They can arrange their work according to their thoughts and they had don't have to put in on paper.

✓ They can arrange their work according to their thoughts and they don't have to put it on paper.

'Had don't have' is incorrect; correct is 'don't have'. 'Put in on paper' should be 'put it on paper' to use the correct pronoun.

× That's why they don't prefer to make list they prefer. To do work. Firestone.

✓ That's why they don't prefer to make lists; they prefer to do work first.

'Make list' should be 'make lists'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'Firestone' is likely a mishearing of 'first'. Correcting to 'do work first' makes the sentence coherent.

× I prefer to make list on a phone in my notes be 'cause it's really.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone in my notes because it's really convenient.

'Make list' should be 'make lists'. 'On a phone' is better as 'on my phone'. 'Be' is likely a mishearing and removed. Added 'convenient' to complete the thought.

× A quick way, I just open my phone and type very fast and when I have to. Check or. What? How may I just go and? Go and quick rate through the less so it's convenient where then paper bowl and paper will have to ride with.

✓ It's a quick way; I just open my phone and type very fast. When I have to check, I just go and quickly read through the list, so it's more convenient than paper, which requires writing.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Quick rate through the less' should be 'quickly read through the list'. 'Where then paper bowl and paper will have to ride with' is unclear; corrected to 'more convenient than paper, which requires writing' to convey intended meaning.