List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法の誤りや単語の使い方に注意し、より自然で効果的な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、"becauses"は"because"に修正し、"it's prevents"は"it prevents"に直す必要があります。また、文を簡潔にし、冗長な表現を避けることが大切です。

例: I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents impulse purchases.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りを修正し、意味が明確になるようにしましょう。例えば、"it's help maybe member"は意味が不明瞭なので、"it helps me remember what to do"などに直すと良いです。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげ、論理的な流れを作りましょう。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for work because it helps me remember my tasks. I organize the list based on urgency, and it works very well for me.

提案: 表現をより自然にし、文法を正しく使いましょう。例えば、"prevent them to follow"は"prevent them from following"に修正します。また、理由を明確にし、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いです。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful to follow them. Also, unexpected urgent matters sometimes prevent them from sticking to the list.

提案: 時制の一致や文の構造に注意し、より明確で自然な表現を使いましょう。例えば、"I preferred"は現在の好みを表すために"I prefer"に直し、文を一つにまとめて論理的に説明しましょう。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to see them throughout the day. Sometimes, I also save them on my PC for easy access.

× I make it a point to create a list when I go shopping becauses it helped me remember what I should buy and in addition it's prevents me from making impulse purchasing.

✓ I make it a point to create a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I should buy and in addition it prevents me from making impulse purchases.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'helped' (past tense) when the context requires present tense 'helps' because the action is habitual. Also, 'it's prevents' is incorrect; it should be 'it prevents' without contraction. 'Impulse purchasing' should be 'impulse purchases' as a plural noun phrase.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I work because it's help maybe member.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I work because it helps me remember what I should do.

The phrase 'it's help' is incorrect; the verb should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'maybe member' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it is corrected to 'me remember what I should do' to make sense.

× It's very works for me.

✓ It works very well for me.

The phrase 'very works' is incorrect; 'works' is a verb and cannot be modified by 'very' directly. The correct adverb is 'very well' to modify the verb 'works'.

× Sometimes urgent things happen and they prevent them to follow the list.

✓ Sometimes urgent things happen and they prevent them from following the list.

The verb 'prevent' is followed by 'from' plus the gerund form of the verb. 'Prevent them to follow' is incorrect; it should be 'prevent them from following'.

× I preferred to prepare a list on paper because I find it easier to see throughout the day.

✓ I prefer to prepare a list on paper because I find it easier to see throughout the day.

The use of past tense 'preferred' is incorrect here because the speaker is expressing a current preference. The present tense 'prefer' is appropriate.

× Usually I put on the paper. On my PC so that I can access or see it throughout the day.

✓ Usually I put it on paper or on my PC so that I can access or see it throughout the day.

The phrase 'put on the paper' is incomplete and awkward. It should be 'put it on paper'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and is corrected to combine the ideas properly.