List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I tend to remember what I need."

例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I tend to remember what I need. This helps me shop quickly without having to check notes.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. For example, "Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember tasks clearly and keep me updated."

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember tasks clearly and keep me updated. For instance, I can track deadlines and priorities more effectively.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they can remember tasks easily or use alarms instead."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they can remember tasks easily or use alarms instead. Therefore, they find lists unnecessary.

提案: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then add supporting details with linking words. For example, "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, and reminders help me stay organized."

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, and reminders help me stay organized. Also, I don't have to worry about losing paper notes.

× No, I usually don't make any list valley shop because I verb lean over 2 shop.

✓ No, I usually don't make any list when I shop because I prefer to shop without one.

The phrase 'any list valley shop' is incorrect and unclear. The word 'list' should be singular or plural depending on context; here, 'any list' is correct. The phrase 'valley shop' is likely a mishearing or typo. The verb phrase 'I verb lean over 2 shop' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to shop without one.' This correction addresses singular/plural usage and verb usage for clarity.

× And I was knowing all about like what I need for my shopping.

✓ And I knew all about what I needed for my shopping.

The phrase 'I was knowing' is incorrect because 'know' is a stative verb and is not used in the past continuous tense. The correct past tense form is 'I knew.' Also, 'what I need' should be in past tense 'what I needed' to maintain tense consistency.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work because. It to make me remind clearly and also most of the time it made me updated about the things that are that I need for my work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work because it helps me remember clearly, and most of the time it keeps me updated about the things that I need for my work.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'It to make me remind clearly' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me remember clearly.' Also, 'it made me updated' should be 'it keeps me updated' to maintain present tense and correct verb usage.

× It does work because I can.

✓ It does work because I can rely on it.

The sentence 'It does work because I can.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'rely on it' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× It depends on the people, like some someone don't like to make the list and because they can easily recognize to what work they need to do or they set up some like alarm or some reminders for their work so there doesn't need to make any list.

✓ It depends on the people; some don't like to make lists because they can easily recognize what work they need to do, or they set up alarms or reminders for their work, so they don't need to make any lists.

The sentence has singular/plural inconsistencies: 'some someone don't' should be 'some don't'; 'make the list' should be 'make lists'; 'there doesn't need to make any list' should be 'they don't need to make any lists.' Also, 'recognize to what work' is incorrect; it should be 'recognize what work.' These corrections address singular/plural agreement and preposition use.

× I preferred to make a list on my phone because.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because

The use of past tense 'preferred' is incorrect here as the speaker is expressing a current preference. The present tense 'prefer' is appropriate.

× A phone is with me all the time and I set a reminder on my phone and it update me about the work that I need to turn and I do not like to carry a paper with me because I kill lost it but the reminder that I sat in my phone stay.

✓ My phone is with me all the time, and I set reminders on it to update me about the work I need to do. I do not like to carry paper with me because I might lose it, but the reminders I set on my phone stay.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'A phone is with me' should be 'My phone is with me'; 'it update me' should be 'it updates me' (subject-verb agreement); 'work that I need to turn' is unclear, corrected to 'work I need to do'; 'I kill lost it' is incorrect, corrected to 'I might lose it'; 'reminder that I sat' should be 'reminders I set.' These corrections improve clarity, grammar, and verb agreement.