List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve the natural flow and clarity by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep the answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember important items. For example, sometimes I forget things if I don't write them down. Therefore, making a list ensures I buy everything I need efficiently.

提案: Focus on grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clear, specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and keep the answer concise.

例: Yes, I always make a list before starting work because it helps me remember important tasks and stay organized. For instance, when I worked at a pizza shop, I wrote down all the orders and ingredients to avoid mistakes.

提案: Clarify your ideas and avoid hesitation sounds. Use correct vocabulary and grammar to express why some people dislike making lists. Provide specific reasons and use linking words for coherence.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally. Additionally, they might feel that lists limit their flexibility during the day.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid redundancy. Keep the answer natural and concise.

例: To be honest, I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient and easy to use. Moreover, I can quickly edit or add items whenever needed.

× Yes, I do make a list and when I go to shop because it is the important one because sometime I forgot some items.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because it is important since sometimes I forget some items.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' for correct verb usage. 'The important one' is vague; 'important' alone suffices here.

× Yes, I do make a list and when I go to shop because it is the important one because sometime I forgot some items.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because it is important since sometimes I forget some items.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' which uses the gerund form after 'go' to indicate the activity.

× Yes, I do make a list and when I go to shop because it is the important one because sometime I forgot some items.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because it is important since sometimes I forget some items.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget' to indicate habitual action.

× Yes, I always make a list I before starting we call started work 'cause it is a important and and because it is help me remember important task and stay organized.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before starting work because it is important and it helps me remember important tasks and stay organized.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'important' and the context of multiple tasks. Also, 'a important' should be 'important' or 'an important'.

× Yes, I always make a list I before starting we call started work 'cause it is a important and and because it is help me remember important task and stay organized.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before starting work because it is important and it helps me remember important tasks and stay organized.

The phrase 'before starting we call started work' is incorrect and confusing; it should be 'before starting work' to correctly express the idea.

× Yes, I always make a list I before starting we call started work 'cause it is a important and and because it is help me remember important task and stay organized.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before starting work because it is important and it helps me remember important tasks and stay organized.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× For example, when I work at a pizza shop and I would write down all the orders an ingredients.

✓ For example, when I work at a pizza shop, I write down all the orders and ingredients.

'An ingredients' is incorrect; 'ingredients' is plural and should not have 'an'. Also, 'would write' is better as 'write' to indicate habitual action.

× For example, when I work at a pizza shop and I would write down all the orders an ingredients.

✓ For example, when I work at a pizza shop, I write down all the orders and ingredients.

'Would write' suggests conditional or habitual past action; here, simple present 'write' is more appropriate to describe habitual action.

× Uh, will making Easter is, is the best way to reminder Euro all task.

✓ Uh, well, making lists is the best way to remember all tasks.

'Will' should be 'well'; 'Easter' is incorrect and should be 'lists'; 'reminder Euro' is incorrect and should be 'remember'; 'all task' should be 'all tasks'.

× Uh, will making Easter is, is the best way to reminder Euro all task.

✓ Uh, well, making lists is the best way to remember all tasks.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'all' and the context.

× So definitely most of people prefer to making Lister because sometime or they, they, they have for get to, uh, some important task.

✓ So definitely most people prefer making lists because sometimes they forget some important tasks.

'Most of people' should be 'most people'; 'prefer to making' should be 'prefer making'; 'Lister' should be 'lists'; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'have for get to' should be 'forget'; 'task' should be plural 'tasks'.

× So definitely most of people prefer to making Lister because sometime or they, they, they have for get to, uh, some important task.

✓ So definitely most people prefer making lists because sometimes they forget some important tasks.

'Prefer to making' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer making' without 'to' before the gerund.

× So definitely most of people prefer to making Lister because sometime or they, they, they have for get to, uh, some important task.

✓ So definitely most people prefer making lists because sometimes they forget some important tasks.

The phrase 'have for get to' is incorrect; it should be 'forget' to express the intended meaning.

× To be honest, I do prefer make a list on my mobile phone because it is a convenient for me and it is a easy way.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is convenient for me and it is an easy way.

'Prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'; 'a convenient' should be 'convenient' without article; 'a easy' should be 'an easy' because 'easy' starts with a vowel sound.

× To be honest, I do prefer make a list on my mobile phone because it is a convenient for me and it is a easy way.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is convenient for me and it is an easy way.

'Do prefer make' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer to make'.

× So definitely I prefer to on mobile phone.

✓ So definitely I prefer to use my mobile phone.

'Prefer to on mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to use my mobile phone' or 'prefer using my mobile phone'.