List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to avoid fragmented sentences and pronunciation errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about what you write on your list. Also, correct vocabulary like 'shopping' instead of 'swapping' and 'write down' instead of 'IE not down'.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. I write down essential items such as rice, flour, vegetable oil, cheese, butter, and bread because I often forget them otherwise.

提案: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, and I follow it carefully. This helps me remember important tasks because forgetting them could cause problems in my job.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases. Try to express your ideas more simply and clearly. Avoid unclear expressions like 'make knots in their mobile phones'. Instead, explain that some people rely on memory or use reminders on their phones. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: In my opinion, some people do not like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember what to buy. Also, some use reminders or notes on their phones instead of writing a list.

提案: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repetition. Also, use correct verb forms and sentence structure.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I am a careless person. If I don't have a physical list, I might forget it, so keeping the list on my phone helps me remember easily.

× Usually when I go for swapping I bring my list with me an yes, IE not down some essential things such as. Rice floor and. Some vegetable oil, an cheese, butter and bread.

✓ Usually when I go for shopping I bring my list with me and write down some essential things such as rice flour, some vegetable oil, cheese, butter, and bread.

The word 'swapping' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form is 'shopping' to indicate the activity of buying goods. Also, 'write down' is the correct phrase to indicate noting items on a list. Proper nouns and conjunctions are corrected for clarity.

× Rice floor and. Some vegetable oil, an cheese, butter and bread.

✓ Rice flour, some vegetable oil, cheese, butter, and bread.

The word 'floor' is a misspelling of 'flour', which is a singular noun here. Also, 'an cheese' is incorrect; 'cheese' is uncountable and does not require an article. Proper punctuation and conjunctions are used for listing items.

× Usually I'm a make a list for my work an I followed that list in my workplace because I forgot about.

✓ Usually I make a list for my work and I follow that list in my workplace because I might forget something.

The phrase 'I'm a make' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I make'. Also, 'followed' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'follow'. The sentence is adjusted for clarity and tense consistency.

× If I forget something important about my work, it would be unbeneficial.

✓ If I forget something important about my work, it would be unbeneficial.

The sentence is grammatically correct in tense usage; however, 'unbeneficial' is not a standard word. It should be replaced with 'not beneficial'. This is a vocabulary issue rather than a grammar problem.

× Not beneficial for my.

✓ Not beneficial for me.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrectly used here; the correct object pronoun is 'me' after the preposition 'for'. This is a common prepositional pronoun error.

× An also some people make knots in their mobile phones such as by wire where sage to each other so they don't need to make a list and keep with them.

✓ Also, some people make notes on their mobile phones, such as by WhatsApp where they message each other, so they don't need to make a list and keep it with them.

The phrase 'make knots' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make notes'. 'By wire where sage' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'WhatsApp where they message'. Prepositions and vocabulary are corrected for clarity.

× I used to make a list on my phone because I I'm careless person so I don't if I don't carry a physical list then what will I do because I don't have list So I usually keep a list in my mobile phones so I can easily memorized at least.

✓ I usually make a list on my phone because I am a careless person, so if I don't carry a physical list, then what will I do? I don't have a list otherwise, so I usually keep a list on my mobile phone so I can easily memorize it at least.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'used to' implies past habit but context suggests present habit, so 'usually make' is better. 'I I'm careless person' corrected to 'I am a careless person'. 'Memorized' should be 'memorize' to match present tense. Articles and prepositions are corrected for clarity and grammar.