List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I do list" and "by those ascential things." To improve, try to use more natural expressions and correct sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy like "I do make a list" and "when I go out for shopping and a prior to when I plan to go out."

例: Yes, I always make a list of items I need before going shopping. I usually use the notes app on my iPhone to keep track, so I don't forget anything important.

提案: Your response has some repetition and grammatical mistakes, such as "I also. Tend to make" and "finish finish my work." To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I tend to make lists for my work, especially when I have many tasks. This helps me manage my time effectively and complete everything on schedule, so my workload doesn't pile up.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrases like "due to that version reason because they cannot accommodate." To improve, try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, provide specific reasons and link your ideas logically.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they are not very organized. Even if they make lists, they often don't follow them, which makes the process ineffective for them.

提案: Your answer has some incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like "Because it was. Quick to carry" and "buy items wilamette store." To improve, try to form complete sentences and clarify your points. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unnecessary pauses.

例: I used to prefer making lists on paper when I was in India because it was easy to carry. However, now I usually use my phone to make lists, which helps me shop more efficiently without confusion.

× I do make a list of things that I need to buy when I go out for shopping and a prior to when I plan to go out.

✓ I do make a list of things that I need to buy when I go out shopping and prior to when I plan to go out.

The phrase 'go out for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go out shopping' without 'for'. This is because 'go' is followed by the verb in -ing form to indicate the activity. Also, 'a prior to' is incorrect; it should be 'prior to' without 'a'.

× I make a list in my notes application in my iPhone so that I can easily read an by those ascential things.

✓ I make a list in my notes application on my iPhone so that I can easily read and buy those essential things.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using an app on a device; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, 'an by' is a typo and should be 'and buy'. The word 'ascential' is a spelling error and should be 'essential'.

× Well, I also. Tend to make a list for my work.

✓ Well, I also tend to make a list for my work.

The period after 'also' incorrectly breaks the sentence. It should be a continuous sentence without a period to maintain proper sentence structure.

× Especially when there are a lot of things to do in busy environment so that I can keep a track of time as well as finish finish my work on time so that it does not pile up things at the end of the day.

✓ Especially when there are a lot of things to do in a busy environment so that I can keep track of time as well as finish my work on time so that things do not pile up at the end of the day.

The phrase 'in busy environment' needs the article 'a' before 'busy environment'. 'Keep a track' should be 'keep track' as 'track' is uncountable here. The repeated word 'finish finish' is a typo and should be 'finish'. The phrase 'pile up things' should be 'things pile up' for correct word order.

× Usually in their lives and most probably even if they make a list they don't know they do not follow them while they shop or the work.

✓ Usually in their lives and most probably even if they make a list, they do not follow it while they shop or work.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect when referring to 'a list' which is singular; it should be 'it'. Also, 'the work' should be just 'work' without 'the' in this context.

× So I believe due to that version reason because they cannot accommodate.

✓ So I believe it is due to that reason because they cannot accommodate.

The phrase 'due to that version reason' is incorrect; it should be 'due to that reason'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'it is' clarifies the meaning.

× Well, earlier I used to prefer on paper when I was in India.

✓ Well, earlier I used to prefer paper when I was in India.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'prefer paper' is the correct form without 'on'.

× Because it was. Quick to carry but nowadays I usually prefer to make list on my phone so that easily I could read an buy items wilamette store without any confusion or over thinking more.

✓ Because it was quick to carry, but nowadays I usually prefer to make a list on my phone so that I can easily read and buy items at the store without any confusion or overthinking.

The period after 'was' incorrectly breaks the sentence. 'Make list' needs the article 'a'. 'So that easily I could' should be 'so that I can easily' for correct adverb placement and tense. 'An buy' is a typo for 'and buy'. 'Wilamette store' is unclear; assuming 'at the store' is intended. 'Over thinking more' should be 'overthinking' as one word and 'more' is unnecessary.