List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I often forget the things I need. Making a list helps me remember everything and buy enough supplies.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách công việc.

例: Yes, I often create a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. For example, when I have many things to do, writing them down allows me to focus and manage my time better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they are not used to organizing their work or they don't think it's important. As a result, their work may be less efficient.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại để lập danh sách.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I have an app that saves my notes quickly. It also reminds me automatically, so I can check my list anytime.

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✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I usually forget the necessary things I need to buy, and it helps me remember to buy enough.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper sentence structure, making them unclear. Combining the ideas into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

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✓ Yes, I often create a list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. For example, when I have many things to do, writing them down allows me to focus. This method works well for me.

The original sentences contain incomplete thoughts and unclear phrases. Correcting sentence fragments and unclear words improves understanding and grammatical accuracy.

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✓ In my opinion, they don't pay attention to their job or they don't have the habit of doing important work. Also, their job efficiency is low.

Incorrect prepositions 'on' and 'about' are used; the correct prepositions are 'in' (in my opinion) and 'to' (pay attention to). Also, 'habit too right' is corrected to 'habit of doing'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

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✓ I prefer to write a list on my phone because I have an app that can memorize everything quickly. When I write a list, it is automated, and I can check it when I have time.

Incorrect preposition 'to rewrite' is corrected to 'prefer to write'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness, fixing unclear phrases and preposition misuse.