List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免断句过短，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. I write down all the items I need and check the list while shopping to make sure I don't forget anything.

提案: 回答中句子不连贯，语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子并适当使用连接词，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I often make a list of tasks to complete during the day. It helps me organize my time efficiently and keeps me motivated to finish my work.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但可以增加具体例子或进一步解释，使内容更丰富。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do tasks based on how they feel at the moment. For example, if they feel energetic, they might do harder tasks first, which helps them stay motivated.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子，避免口语化和不连贯的表达，明确说明理由。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to control and see my tasks. Checking off completed tasks gives me a sense of achievement and motivates me to keep going.

× I sometimes make a list all myself would before I go to shop.

✓ I sometimes make a list all by myself before I go shopping.

句子结构混乱，'all myself would'不符合英语表达习惯，应改为'all by myself'，'go to shop'应改为'go shopping'，因为go shopping是固定搭配，表示去购物。

× I will step down all the things I want to buy.

✓ I will write down all the things I want to buy.

'step down'用法错误，应使用'write down'表示写下。

× And. Check. The list while I'm shopping.

✓ And check the list while I'm shopping.

句子不完整，断句错误，应合并为一句完整句子。

× I often make a list of tasks I should complete. For the whole day.

✓ I often make a list of tasks I should complete for the whole day.

句子断开不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。

× It helps me organize my time more efficiently and come. Make me more motivated.

✓ It helps me organize my time more efficiently and makes me more motivated.

句子结构错误，'come. Make me'不符合语法，应改为'and makes me'，保持主谓一致。

× Some people may prefer to finish tasks according to their emotional state instead of priority.

✓ Some people may prefer to finish tasks according to their emotional state instead of their priority.

缺少所有格，'priority'前应加所有格'their'，表示'他们的优先级'。

× I prefer to make a list on paper bill 'cause it control tasks.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it controls tasks.

'bill 'cause'是口语缩写，正式表达应为'because'，且主谓不一致，'it control'应为'it controls'。

× Every time I check off, tasks have finished.

✓ Every time I check off tasks, I have finished them.

主谓不一致，原句中'tasks have finished'错误，任务不能自己完成，应改为'我已经完成它们'。

× It can. Make me feel a sense of achievement and encourage me to walking, huh?

✓ It can make me feel a sense of achievement and encourage me to walk, huh?

动词后接动词不定式时，应使用原形动词，'encourage me to walking'应改为'encourage me to walk'。